Deafening Silence - Chapter 5 of 5

Aug 24, 2011 22:24

Title: Deafening Silence - Chapter 5 of 5
Author: silmanumenel
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Rating: PG-13, for some language
Pairing: Danny/Steve, pre-slash, will turn into slash
Warnings: Angst - and now also fluff, so... Flangst?
Final Word Count: Overall: 18.316 - Chapter 5: 6.210
Summary: Danny is behaving strangely and no one knows why. When Steve finally ( Read more... )

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huntress69 August 24 2011, 20:56:39 UTC
I am so glad they finally managed to talk it through, and now they are happy, as they should be, and - Steve closes his eyes, listens to the sounds of the ocean and to Danny’s soft breathing and thinks that he might’ve returned to Hawaii over a year ago, but it’s only now that he’s truly found home. - that just about sums them up. Thanks for writing it and not leaving it as a one-shot.

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silmanumenel August 25 2011, 17:56:40 UTC
Thanks for reading and for your comments. I'm really glad you liked it. It was fun writing it, and I'm also happy that I did decide to continue it. :)

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americandirrty August 24 2011, 22:12:15 UTC
Wow this is so perfect. I love this chapter just as much as the others. Thank you for writing an amazing story. It's definitely one of my favorites.

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silmanumenel August 25 2011, 17:59:28 UTC
Oh wow, thanks for your comment! I'm really happy that you liked that much, I had a lot of fun writing it and so it's nice to hear that others enjoyed it as well. :)

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finduilas_clln August 24 2011, 22:20:45 UTC
*standing ovation*

I loved loved loved all the angsty parts, but it feels my heart with glee that there was a happy ending.

What a wonderful series. Well done!

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silmanumenel August 25 2011, 18:01:24 UTC
*bows*

Thank you so much! I liked writing all this angst for a change, but then I couldn't resist the fluff in the end. :) I'm glad you liked it.

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bfive0 August 24 2011, 23:03:30 UTC
*happy sigh* you finished it <3 happy ending!!! And Steve just needing to hold into Danny when they were talking was strong!!! Thanks for the lovely story <3

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silmanumenel August 25 2011, 18:07:09 UTC
Thanks for your comments! I'm glad you liked their talk, it was really important for me that I got this one right. And the happy ending was of course a must! :)

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kitmerlot1213 August 24 2011, 23:22:13 UTC
A lovely ending!

The Steve/Danny conversation was everything I hoped it would be and I think it goes without saying that they work best as a team.

And Danny's mom is just adorable--wonderful work on this story :)

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silmanumenel August 28 2011, 10:32:45 UTC
I'm happy you liked the conversation, I really wanted to get it right. Thanks a lot!

Danny's mum is great, perhaps I'll get to use her again in another story. :)

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