You Can Have Me

Jan 24, 2011 01:02

Title: You Can Have Me
Pairing: Adam/Kris
Word count: 2650
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst
Summary: The big picture isn't so pretty.
Disclaimer: Pure imagination. No disrespect intended.
Author's note: Grateful hugs to anya7lee and morganlight for the tea and sympathy.

the closeup )

genre: porn, fic, genre: angst, adam, genre: romance, genre: dl, kradam

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silver_keynotes January 25 2011, 00:14:31 UTC
Aww, I love you for singling out those lines. <333

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silver_keynotes January 25 2011, 00:16:49 UTC
No premonition, I swear! Just my imagination doing its thing.

Thanks so much for reading. <3

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firesprite1105 January 24 2011, 09:23:10 UTC
Ahhh, I have not been in the mood for angst lately, but this was fabulous. I enjoy how you turn a phrase, and this was angsty without wallowing for the sake of wallowing, y'know? It just felt real.

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silver_keynotes January 25 2011, 00:19:24 UTC
"Real" is one of the very best compliments. Thank you so much.

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anya7lee January 24 2011, 10:02:07 UTC
I am in love with your writing. It has something in it I could never explain - the X-factor. It emanates at so many levels with images flickering in and out, both incredibly intimate and universal. For me, you do justice to the kind of experience possible between Adam and Kris. And this story makes me feel so sad. Its as if you immersed yourself deep into the waters their connection, and then you sang it back to us like a mermaid: THIS is what is behind that look in Adam's eyes and this is what is behind those empty repetitive hallmark tweets from Arkansas. The echo of a promise broken.

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silver_keynotes January 25 2011, 00:28:26 UTC
Generous Rose, you make me feel accomplished and wise and picturesquely mythical. Immersed, yes, I definitely plunged into those crazy waters that both of us find so inviting.

*splashes you with tail*

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diane_mckay January 24 2011, 16:50:45 UTC
This is...amazing. You really captured what it means live your life feeling like it won't ever get better.

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silver_keynotes January 25 2011, 00:30:18 UTC
*squeezes you*

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