You Can Have Me

[silver_keynotes]

Title: You Can Have Me
Pairing: Adam/Kris
Word count: 2650
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst
Summary: The big picture isn't so pretty.
Disclaimer: Pure imagination. No disrespect intended.
Author's note: Grateful hugs to anya7lee and morganlight for the tea and sympathy.

Comments

[capnzebbie]

Beautiful!

[silver_keynotes]

Thank you, stealth!Kitty!

[morganlight]

<3 bb.

Your sentences are like dragon scales - lifted up by some monstrous, ridiculous thing, shining and yet not fantastic, moving like spasms of muscle. Enough non-sequiturs to drive a reader crazy, and yet - dreamlike. Dreams never are sequential.

It's like you alternate between the surreal and the painfully real. So real, though. So ridiculously real. It makes me hurt for them, and admire you.

[silver_keynotes]

Good Lord. How do you do it--whip a poem out of thin air?

Thank you, dangerous creature. <333

[cellia]

You have an amazing way with words!

[silver_keynotes]

Thank you! :D

[scorpio_15]

this is...breathtaking poetry. your ability to convey complexity with few words is a gift. seamless flow from reflecting on the past to the present. heartbreaking too. wow.

[silver_keynotes]

Such gratifying praise, thank you! <333

[silver_keynotes]

LOL, thanks for reading!