You Can Have Me

Jan 24, 2011 01:02

Title: You Can Have Me
Pairing: Adam/Kris
Word count: 2650
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst
Summary: The big picture isn't so pretty.
Disclaimer: Pure imagination. No disrespect intended.
Author's note: Grateful hugs to anya7lee and morganlight for the tea and sympathy.

the closeup )

genre: porn, fic, genre: angst, adam, genre: romance, genre: dl, kradam

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jagrah January 27 2011, 07:53:09 UTC
What beautiful writing, with every word so carefully chosen. It is indeed angsty, but not overwrought, and ends with enough uncertainty that we're not left feeling totally hopeless. And the sex is integral to the mood and the story, not just PWP. (Not that I mind PWP!)

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silver_keynotes January 27 2011, 20:39:39 UTC
Beautiful words of praise, and yay, owls! <333

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adamluvr36_fic January 27 2011, 08:16:20 UTC
I know I read this before, or something that ended like it. Not sure if I commented or not, but you know I love your writing. Its so like poetry its lovingly painful. And heartbreaking. And beautiful. I never wanted this to end. Truly a bit of linguistic art. I envy this ability you possess to weave words into poetry. Lovely! <33333

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silver_keynotes January 27 2011, 20:42:21 UTC
Thank you for saying all this, bb. It means a lot. <333

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silver_keynotes January 27 2011, 20:43:40 UTC
Aww, bb. *hugs*

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2pussycat January 27 2011, 18:42:43 UTC
The intensity of emotions and the way you write them...heart-wrenching! The love and affection they have for each other is beautiful. But on the other hand the predicament that they are in also feels like a kind of torcher.
This is the first of your fics that I have read. Hope its ok to read more. you have a new fan!

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silver_keynotes January 27 2011, 20:45:11 UTC
You're lovely to say so, and of course I'm thrilled that you want to keep reading. <333

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she_recs January 29 2011, 03:54:18 UTC
Posting a comment on this much-loved fic has proven tricky for me--I keep halting mid-keystroke, scrolling up, and rereading!

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silver_keynotes January 30 2011, 01:54:12 UTC
Aww, this makes me so happy! Thank you. <333

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