The Window: Chapter 16...

Aug 02, 2007 00:06

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings:  Carousels...

Window

Chapter Sixteen

Shizune licked her finger and flicked through the wedding magazine on her desk, sighing as she did so. It was a quiet morning in the Hokage tower today. The Hokage herself hadn’t arrived yet and only a handful of people had popped in to ( Read more... )

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anonymous August 2 2007, 00:04:06 UTC
this chapter could not have come at a better time -- finals just ended!

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togu August 2 2007, 00:24:41 UTC
omg noooo!! team kakashi can't break up!! D: What are they gonna do now?!

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lef August 2 2007, 00:35:41 UTC
Thank you for this great chapter!!! aww... Sakura is so insecure! She can't even imagine for one second that Kakashi might actually love her.
Loved the drama... I like how you showed Naruto's feelings in this chapter, it makes his bout of anger more understandable.
I was really shocked when Tsunade said she would no longer teach Sakura... of all the punishments I thought she could come up with, I never thought of that. And Kakashi's a chuunin... I feel so sorry for them. I really love the Kakashi Sakura couple in this fic, they are so sweet together, despite all the drama and uncertainties... I can't wait to see how it further develops. Anyway, sorry I don't provide more constructive criticism, but your story is just perfect to me !keep up the excellent work!

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fdandaland August 2 2007, 00:37:35 UTC
OMG! I almost feel like her ..
And what is the truth about his feelings? He's REALLY in love with her? *¬*
Thanks for update so soon!

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arkanefyre August 2 2007, 00:43:49 UTC
....WHY CAN'T SAKURA BE HONEST WITH HERSELF. The chapter was made of awesome, and I get Naruto's thinking now (I was pretty mad with him last chapter). I understand Sakura's motivation too, but she's completely shell-shocked right now, and she's really, really not thinking rationally. She obviously loves Kakashi, but she's unwilling to admit it, even though, as Kakashi said, they "paid" for it. Whether she's afraid of the consequences or afraid of the fact that Kakashi didn't reciprocate her feelings. I think, given the circumstances, that's exactly how Sakura would protect herself, but it doesn't leave me any less pissed with her selfishness at that very moment.

Tsunade and the Book was very very cool. <3

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