The O.C. Fic: Perspective

[silverweave]

Title: Perspective
Fandom: The O.C.
Rating / Genre: PG / Gen
Words: 1485.
Spoilers: Season One, set sometime between The Outsider and The Countdown.
Disclaimer / Note: The O.C. is property of Fox. I write without a beta, any mistakes are my own.
Schmoopy Dedication: Written for sailblazer, for the Fifth O.C. Sentence Fic Challenge; both prompter and prompt

Comments

[snapsparagus]

Ooh, that was great. Very nicely done.

[mel39]

Lovely! And very topical (at least over here). I think you showed that difference that adults and kids feel about carrying a knife very effectively - we can see how it doesn't help - and kids look on it so differently, and who can blame them really, when they are in the situations some find themselves in? Aside from the knife issue - this had a wonderful season one feel to it - I particularly liked the Ryan's reaction to Kirsten's naivety - that hint of teen insolence that was sadly missing between the Cohens later in the show.

[beachtree]

Shoot. LJ always seems to gobble my comments when I'm late. I knew I should have waited, but hey, can you blame me? It is YOUR story, after all, and what an amazing one that strikes all the right notes!

I'll be back later to try again.

[mirella67]

So good. This would have made a fantastic episode for Season 1; I always wished we had had more scenes of the Cohens dealing with Ryan's past.

[parisamy]

I've just started reading your stories, and this is great! I love early season one fics :)

[silverweave]

Hi!

Thank you for the review, this was a lovely surprise on an otehrwise humdrum Friday. Glad you enjoyed it.