Comments | similiesslip: Title: "Digging for Brown Gold"

similiesslip

Title: "Digging for Brown Gold"

Nov 04, 2011 17:04

It was a dry, hot day. I desperately hoped the ranch owner I was headed to was someone who enjoyed hot weather. Anything to put him in a good mood ( Read more... )

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basric November 4 2011, 22:08:57 UTC

He certainly found her serious subject amusing. Loved it, as usual.

similiesslip November 5 2011, 01:21:31 UTC

I wasn't sure where to go with this prompt. I'm glad the contrast worked:)

ktdid525 November 4 2011, 22:46:41 UTC

Cute story. I like Mr. Engler the story gives him a strong personality.

similiesslip November 5 2011, 01:23:07 UTC

I'm glad you liked it:) I found this prompt very difficult!

ktdid525 November 5 2011, 01:34:09 UTC

I did too. My entry is not at all like what I write.

similiesslip November 5 2011, 01:45:04 UTC

I think Gary does it on purpose though, LOL

baxaphobia November 4 2011, 22:58:17 UTC

This is a fun story! Smile!

similiesslip November 5 2011, 01:23:42 UTC

I'm glad you found it fun. I don't think it's my strongest work or anything but that prompt isn't easy!

adoptedwriter November 4 2011, 23:20:30 UTC

Hahaha!!! Dr. Gary! Haha. Your mood is crappy! Seriously, I did enjoy the dialogue in this piece. It allowed the story to have natural " movement". AW

similiesslip November 5 2011, 01:24:28 UTC

I'm glad you got the joke:)

solstice_singer November 4 2011, 23:53:08 UTC

Nice job with a really tricky topic.

similiesslip November 5 2011, 01:28:30 UTC

That means a lot from a great writer like you:)