Title: "Crossing to Adulthood"

[similiesslip]

princess_charming: you there?
shoutingviolet: hey! was just about to head to bed. thought you were over at emmas tonight
princess_charming: we went to a party then I went to lukes place
shoutingviolent: luke as in chem class luke?
princess_charming: XD
shoutingviolet: omg! AND?!!
princess_charming: his parents were out to dinner
princess_charming: their

Comments

[muchtooarrogant]

I haven't read ecosopher's entry yet, but I wanted to tell you that you certainly captured the "high school girl" feel very well.

<< I heard that once you have sex with a guy, you have to text topless photos, it’s practically mandatory. >>

LOL So many regrets, born too early, no eye sight... And, my poor daughters. *shudders*

I was just wondering when I'd see the first LJI post this week on my Flist.

Good job!

Dan

[alien_infinity]

You did a good job here and wrote a very real-sounding high school girl narrator. :)

[similiesslip]

I'm glad it rang true as I am almost 34. I hoped it sounds authentic:)

[jacq22]

Sounds like all the things I hear , because I am at the 'invisible' age, I can listen and nobody notices. LOL. You nailed it perfectly, the teenage angst. Well done.

[myrna_bird]

I could identify with Violet's feelings of being the one left behind. Course when I was a teenager, it only meant not holding hands in the movies or not getting a goodnight kiss at the door. The times are sure different now!

[basric]

I thought after reading both you both intersected perfectly, the friend wanting every detail being left behind while her friend was wanting to take it back. Not sure how to talk to her friend. Well done, both of you.