#4: A Short

[simpaige]

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[w_sims]

Poor Dustin :/ Poor Beau :/ Poor Brandi (I hope she isn't still pregnant!)

[simpaige]

I agree on the Dustin and Beau, not so much Brandi. Hah.
Thanks for reading!

[antimaccassar]

This is really good! Poor Dustin! Brandi is such a bad mother... I hope you continue it!

[simpaige]

Thank you!

[saria_deea]

Wow just wow <3 I really like your take on this, Brandi always seemed like the sweet protecting mum! But then again, coming from the girl who finds the Goths boring, it's not that surprising XD I really can't wait for more, awesome job!

[simpaige]

Thank you so much!

[lovelyxwow]

Oh the worst part is that I can actually see this. A widower that drinks herself to forget her life...Dustin working to support his little brother. :| It's so sad. I like what you did, though.

[simpaige]

Thanks!

[krolowa_francji]

You know, when I noticed that she's drinking while pregnant, I winced IRL.
It's a really good story - it's short, but it leaves an impression. I haven't seen that spin put on Brandi, and I find it pretty interesting. Also, your pictures are very good, both posing- and composition-wise.

[simpaige]

Originally, you weren't supposed to see that she had "popped," but it happened when I was setting up so I just went with it. I guess it just adds to it all.
Thank you so much. Really, that means a lot to me. :)

[krolowa_francji]

No problem :) if you would like more feedback, maybe post this story to maxis_match? I'm sure many people would enjoy it, too.

[simpaige]

I'll definitely have to do that. Thanks for the tip. :)