Secret Santa Fic For lilbreck

Jan 01, 2010 12:35

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He is not one to share. She is one to try. Kal-El-centric. Chloe. Au. Pg.

For Tonya. Sorry there’s no smut.

Big thanks to sanadafaye who cleaned up the story nicely.

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fic: smallville, fic: kal-el

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legendarytobes January 1 2010, 21:00:43 UTC
Ouch, gut punch mel!

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simplytoopretty January 2 2010, 16:12:59 UTC
Well, it's me. *g*

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starbug93 January 1 2010, 21:03:56 UTC
lovely fic. A very true depiction of how Clark could have turned out if he was never found by the Kents. And I enjoyed how true to form Chloe was and that the 2 of them have ended up at the DP. I would love to see a sequel to this in which Kal opens up more.

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simplytoopretty January 2 2010, 16:13:44 UTC
Thanks so much for commenting!

I may think about a sequel. I've had a couple of requests, and I like this little au and maybe there is more to be written. Who knows.

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chaliebrown363 January 1 2010, 21:34:39 UTC
Wow, this was a great read. I really like the way you wrote Clark and Chloe in this, particularly Clark. Like the above commenter, I would love to read a sequel to this.

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simplytoopretty January 2 2010, 16:14:00 UTC
Thanks so much for commenting!

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lilbreck January 1 2010, 22:26:41 UTC
The angst level and beautiful characterization in this more than make up for the lack of smut. Good lord, this was fantastic!

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simplytoopretty January 2 2010, 16:14:53 UTC
Yay! I'm thrilled that you liked it.

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monicaop January 2 2010, 02:09:38 UTC
Wow... amazing!! This was so sad and deep and just... wow.

Kalel is just... how Clark might have been and Davis.. scary stuff comes when I think about him.

I'm really sad of the way it ended, I believe it deserves a sequel but I don't know if you are going to write it.. pretty please boss???

Tons of hugs and I hope you had an amazing New Year!! Hugs!!

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simplytoopretty January 2 2010, 16:15:36 UTC
Thanks so much for commenting!

I may write a sequel. I like this au and there might be more to be written in it, so maybe.

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