images of broken light

[augustfai]

a kiss, and all was said.
AN ARASHI FICTION QUEST.
Title: images of broken light
Pairing(s): Ohno/Jun
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~3800
Summary: Ohno spends the night at Jun's.
A/N: This fic, besides being written for the a kiss and all was said challenge, is not usually like the ones I post here. The style is very different, for one (though this is how I

Comments

[vleong]

AWWWWW CUTE<3 I LOVE YOU WRITING JUNTOSHI!!!!<3 PLSSSS WRITE MORE JUNTOSHI XD

[augustfai]

♥ Thank you so much! Don't worry, I'm sure there will be more Juntoshi from me in the future. :D

[calerine]

Oh gawd, you ♥ You are amazing. I love this style and your old style.

I love your portrayal of Juntoshi, I love Jun's uncertainty, how hejust wants some to be there, something constant in his life. And I can see perfectly, Ohno being that constant. I like the idea of Jun shoving Ohno's elbows into the wall - not because I'm DoS - but because it's so human, and I love that in fic. I love that Jun needs to keep reminding himself. and this line happens a lot at my place, he finally says. - kind of broke my heart. All the little quirks, things that Jun does to do something, those are amazing, splendid. So real.

[augustfai]

♥ sdkjasldjklj you are too kind, really. But thank you SO much for this comment, it is wonderful! I am so happy you liked the bit where Jun shoves Ohno into the wall because I really liked that part too, to be honest. :) It's very human, as you said, and unexplainable but still a very real action. So again--thank you thank you thank you!

[aegistheia]

It's lovely how you convey tension and languid surety side-by-side in the alternating narratives. It makes the pacing interesting to absorb. Ohno and Jun would relate with that kind of dynamic, and your story reflects that - and their individual personalities - eloquently.

What's more, the natural slip into things is believable and appreciable, and the entire atmosphere is sweet and weightless without being saccharine or meaningless. Great job! ♥

-Aegis

[augustfai]

Ah, thank you for such an insightful comment! This is exactly how I imagine Ohno and Jun to relate--with a quiet understanding, and with things left unsaid but still known. Again, thank you, and I'm extremely happy you enjoyed the fic. ♥

[risuw_chan]

awwwrrrrrhhh aw aw aw aw cute juntoshi i luv <3333

they're cute together~ my OTP
thanks for making^^

[augustfai]

Thank you for commenting! And you're welcome. I do love this pairing and I'd love to write even more fic for it. :)

[shardaunei]

Is it just me, or there are hardly Juntoshi stories around? Thanks for writing one. Love it!
/PS- ignore Nino in the icon. heh.^^;

[augustfai]

There aren't that many, you're right. :) Thank you so much for commenting! (And I could never ignore Nino. He can be the third wheel. XD)

[shardaunei]

I selfishly wanted Nino all to myself. That's why I'm all for Juntoshi!