images of broken light

[augustfai]

a kiss, and all was said.
AN ARASHI FICTION QUEST.
Title: images of broken light
Pairing(s): Ohno/Jun
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~3800
Summary: Ohno spends the night at Jun's.
A/N: This fic, besides being written for the a kiss and all was said challenge, is not usually like the ones I post here. The style is very different, for one (though this is how I

Comments

[borylovearashi]

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
i love it ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Juntoshi is the best i love it thank you

[augustfai]

Thank you! :D

[waxrose]

This is woooonderful. I love the tension of your writing and particularly how you write Jun. There's just so much feeling in this fic. ♥

[augustfai]

Thank you so much, beautiful! ♥ I'm just surprised at how much tension I managed to slip into this fic without my knowledge. The best things happen unnoticed, I guess. :D And Jun, Jun is always so hard for me to write so I'm really happy to hear that!

[alexiela]

This is a delight to read and I especially love the style you used - it's just right for the feeling you want to convey. I'm you happy you decided to write this pairing, since it seems so unexplored ♥♥♥

[augustfai]

Thank you so much! ♥ I do love this pairing, but not so outright as I do Ohmiya or Sakumoto--I don't know, Juntoshi just sort of...it's my happy place, even if I tend to write them not-so-happy. ;)

[fancyann1974]

beautiful and sweet
thank you so much :)

[augustfai]

Thank you for commenting! :)

[nicefinalbeam]

I think this style really suited the story you were trying to tell. Something I loved was that in spite of being different perspectives, Ohno and Jun were really kind of thinking in a similar way. It's like our Antoine de Saint-Exupéry says, "Life has taught us that love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction."

This is really warm and fuzzy, though I wonder about the time limit placed there. What happens when the 2 days are over? :)

Adding this to the list! ♥

[augustfai]

♥ You are always the best for bringing up Antoine quotes. We love him so, don't we? :) That quote especially is one of my favorites and I didn't think about it before, but it really does fit in with this fic.

When the 2 days are over--well. That's a whole other fic entirely. :D

Thanks love!