Ghost Hunt V2: Ch4

[sinmay]

I didn't edit this, so if you see any grammar errors, feel free to tell me. Two more chapters after this, and volume 2 will be done!

Comments

[akinarei]

Cute ending! I'll point out grammar and spelling mistakes later.

[sayaka86]

Nice, I love the part where, he explains it to Mai and not Ayako :p was that in the anime/manga? I can't seem to recall...

[sinmay]

I don't think that was in the anime or the manga, actually. It would've been a really cute scene in the anime if it were animated..

[sayaka86]

that's such a waste.. and sorry for the double posting.. my internet is playing with me.. sigh..

[ravyncat]

I think it's interesting that Naru called her Masako when he was explaining to Mai, but he only calls her Hara-san to her face.
Though I guess I could be wrong about that.

[sinmay]

When I was translating that part, I was like, What?! I checked the Japanese version and he really does use Masako and not Hara-san there.

So yeah, that took me by surprise too ^^;

[arianataniyama]

The little "larva" fingers all around the well, that was so much creepier than the manga. I loved this chapter.

[lysiithea]

This has been bugging me a bit. The conversation between Ayami-chan and Mai at the end:

"Then, Mai-chan, when are you coming back?"

Shouldn't it be ...

"Then, Mai-oneesan, when are you leaving?" (according to the Chinese version)

First of all, Ayami shouldn't be calling Mai, Mai-chan right, but Mai-oneesan? And when are you leaving, which is tomorrow will be more appropriate as she'll then be able to stay overnight tonight.

[sinmay]

Yeah, that does make more sense. I'll change that.

Ayami really does call Mai, "Mai-chan" though. See:

「麻衣ちゃん、かえっちゃうの？」

[lysiithea]

Heh ... Ayami calls Mai 'Mai-chan'. So cute. She must have felt that Mai is like her 'in age'. Do you have the Japanese version of the novels?

[sinmay]

It's at Mediafire as a Winrar file