The Fifth Act, Chapter 19

Dec 31, 2009 00:14

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  This chapter is mostly conversation.  Next chapter, however, should be getting back to some of the good stuff.  >:D

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act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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ixtey December 30 2009, 14:06:19 UTC
“You think anyone else is going to step in-between those two when they’re going at it?” Angeal replied with humour. “Stop complaining and hurry up before they destroy something.”
> The first time I read this line, I completely misinterpreted it. XD

“He called me a puppet,” Cloud snarled.
> If I didn't know about Cloud's past I would've LOLed forever. He sounds so much like a kid, hee~ <333

haha, for some reason I want to rub it in Kunsel's face that he doesn't have the info on Cloud. And Sephiroth apologizing... he's taking Zack's friendship book really seriously. :PP

I'm really looking forward to their spar. 8D

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sinnatious December 30 2009, 16:02:20 UTC
XD With the right goggles, everything becomes slash. I have to admit, though, that sentence was pretty easy to misinterpret. :P

Aww, why so mean to Kunsel? XD

<3

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ixtey December 30 2009, 23:54:37 UTC
No wonder; my slash goggles are permanently superglued on my face. 8D hasdhkjasdh for some reason people work better when they're taunted, I think? XD

By the way, I hope you have a happy New Year! :DD

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kanaga December 30 2009, 14:12:34 UTC
Ooo...Now there's two things that someone with a Comet cannot be-bored and edgy. XD

Sepiroth is SOOO obsessed!!

Looking forward to the next one!! Been waiting all day for this! =D

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sinnatious December 30 2009, 15:59:04 UTC
Bored, edgy, angry... I seriously think Comet materia should come with a license. XD Ahh, video game logic, where a meteor is more deadly that a series of comets. *__*

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mickeytheblue December 30 2009, 15:19:48 UTC
Sephy always seems to say the wrong things to Cloud. XD

Genesis does have a point about Cloud being all 'puppety', its kinda sad.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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sinnatious December 30 2009, 15:56:48 UTC
It's his special super power. :D

Thanks! Next chapter should be up on Sunday.

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swyrel December 30 2009, 17:47:18 UTC
*sighs* Sephiroth, just give up. You're social skills suck and you're only pissing Cloud off more. Of course, I guess give up isn't in his vocabulary...

Wonderful chapter! I'm just loving all of the interactions between the characters, and can't wait for more! <3

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sinnatious December 31 2009, 15:33:53 UTC
Thank you!

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demon_vampirate December 30 2009, 19:24:16 UTC
Oh gosh. I so cannot wait for the next chapter, especially to see how Angeal and co. are going to handle this.

So much fun~

Also: He was just as fascinated with Strife as Sephiroth, although their admiration definitely lay along different fault lines.
GENESIS HAS A CRUSH. THAT IS ALL.

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sinnatious December 31 2009, 15:50:18 UTC
Yes of course! A crush. That must be it. XD

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demon_vampirate January 2 2010, 04:56:23 UTC
...I do believe I am being mocked. XD

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