The Fifth Act, Chapter 26

Feb 07, 2010 18:52

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  This chapter was a pain in the neck to get right during editing, but in the end, I've become a little fond of it.  ^_^  Hopefully you like it too.

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act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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mickeytheblue February 7 2010, 10:43:08 UTC
NUU! Angeal! Don't Leave! TT___TT

Yes, because of this chapter, I sympathize with Angeal once again.
Its just so sad how the trio is breaking apart all over again, just like in crisis core (except this time, Angeal's the one leaving instead of Genesis)

Three friends go into battle. One is captured, one flies away... - I love how this parallels to what's happening.

On a lighter note, I like how Sephiroth is all clueless about everything. It's just so... cute. ^__^ He seems so innocent and all =3

Just to clarify, the next update is on Sunday, right? (Valentine's day!!! XD)

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sinnatious February 7 2010, 11:42:21 UTC
\o/ Sephiroth is really just a big ol' silver teddy bear, yeah? :P

Indeed, next update is on Sunday! Work's been kicking my ass ever since I returned from travels, so I don't think I can realistically return to the old schedule in the near future. (Valentine's Day again already? Yay, that means hordes of Valentine's Day-themed fics! :D)

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mickeytheblue February 7 2010, 15:06:45 UTC
m'kays. I'll be waiting for Sunday :D

(I'm suddenly tempted to get myself a sephiroth plushie and hug it like a teddy bear =3)

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ixtey February 7 2010, 11:07:20 UTC
GENESIS I AM DISAPPOINT. *D: forever*

Hollander KO'd, only one more scientist to go! Though I honestly am still wishing that the reason why Hojo's body hasn't been found is because he got eaten. But where would Cloud be, then?

nzdgfkjad so was not expecting a new chapter today. Totally made my day, especially after a long day of doing projects and assignments and being forced to go to mass.

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sinnatious February 7 2010, 12:02:40 UTC
XD

Why not expecting a chapter? It's Sunday! I'll be sure to let you guys know whenever the schedule changes. (Which admittedly, it has been doing a lot for the past five chapters.)

Oww, being forced to go to mass. I remember going through that too. My deepest sympathies.

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ixtey February 7 2010, 14:45:42 UTC
idk, forgot it was Sunday and all. When I do lots of productive stuff, I tend to forget the date. Up to now one of my teachers still ridicule me for writing the year as 2004 on the date of one of my assignments last year. XD

Mass was kinda alright. Sure beats having threats of "you will burn in helllllll!" muttered at you/your general direction every minute, then a small lecture every hour or so about mass, the love of God, why being catholic is the only religion that will get you to heaven and believers of other shizz like SDA, Baptist, Born Again, Islam, etc etc. will go to hell (nevermind that they don't know a single thing bout those other religions). I miss my old earphones. My new ones just don't cancel out voices as good. /end minirant

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:) anonymous February 7 2010, 13:00:47 UTC
Brilliant! Ah, I gotta run now- not enough time to leave you a proper review- but seriously. Nice work!

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ASDFGHJKL; DDDDDD: daemoninwhite February 7 2010, 13:37:33 UTC
YOU SAID THAT IT WOULD BE BETTER. YOU SAID. Sure, I might not hate Angeal quite as much BUT HE NEVER SAID SORRY AND OH MY GOD WHERE IS CLOUD AND IF HOJO TOOK EVERYTHING OUT and if he did, whoa, is Hojo a secret badass in DoC? IMMA SIT DOWN SOMEWHERE AND CRY.

What's more liekly tho is that he was flanked with the ever faithful, ever po-faced Turks. If so, I'm going to have to slap some bitches.

Just saying.

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Re: ASDFGHJKL; DDDDDD: laleira_granite February 8 2010, 06:02:36 UTC
As much as the Turks HAET Hojo (with the fire of a thousand suns), Tseng just doesn't have the political capital to oppose him directly.

I don't think ANYONE does, really.

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Re: ASDFGHJKL; DDDDDD: daemoninwhite February 8 2010, 12:24:14 UTC
True, and then there's the whole, if we oppose him, we'll end up like them. I'm sure that's why Hojo allows arugably the most dangerous men/woman on the Planet view his work. Because it's Turks against the world, and if any of them disappeared...

Or maybe they're way less tight knit than this and I'm making mountains out of molehills. I'm not really aware of the Turks characterisation in FFVII.

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Re: ASDFGHJKL; DDDDDD: laleira_granite February 9 2010, 00:10:44 UTC
I'm not sure either - they get most of their characterization from Crisis Core and Before Crisis.

That said, the entire fandom agrees with you, so you're probably spot on.

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ashoakandthorn February 7 2010, 15:10:22 UTC
Update! Angeal really isn't thinking straight anymore, no matter how calm he acts.

And um, the next chapter links are missing for 17 and 22.

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sinnatious February 8 2010, 12:31:21 UTC
D: Thank you for pointing that out! I'm always forgotting to do the chapter linking...

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