The Fifth Act - Chapter 37

May 05, 2010 21:51


Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  Thanks for your patience. Final chapter should be out a week from Sunday, barring any unforeseen circumstances.

This chapter is action. Entirely. You guys like action, right?

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act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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skedaddle_san May 5 2010, 12:17:46 UTC
Look at what you've done! You've reduced us to caps-locking asdf spammers. Hang your head in shame!

:((

Obligatory:
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I'll be looking forward to your next chapter... =_=! *starts to plot about what'll happen next*

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croix_souillees May 5 2010, 12:46:53 UTC
“Allow me to spare you the indecision,” he declared, and smashed Masamune through the glass. <- I found that really, really cool.

This... is awesome. Also, love how you did the equation of "the world doesn't revolve around Seph and Cloud." *amused, is... mostly speechless.

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sinnatious May 6 2010, 11:36:00 UTC
Sephiroth needed to have some cool moments too, tempting though it was to give them all to Genesis. ^_^ Glad you liked it.

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shadowartemis May 5 2010, 16:38:06 UTC
I probably will be upset about the cliffhanger later but right now I can't get past my Genesis love. @_@ Genesis saves the day, entirely unimpressed by Jenova - hee~! As someone who named her first car after him entirely because of this fic, I am pleased he got to be the hero. But oh no Cloud!! We're going to have to set you up for another Tseng councelling session, aren't we? :/ Maybe throw Aeris in there for added calming and shame-on-you effect.

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sinnatious May 6 2010, 11:36:37 UTC
Your car is named Genesis? XD That's awesome! I hope it's red.

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shadowartemis May 6 2010, 13:15:15 UTC
But of course!

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kiriana May 5 2010, 17:04:50 UTC
Aaaaaaah, so good! *______*

Genesis coming in and blasting off Firagas was definitely one of the coolest moments.

Genesis adjusted his gloves. “Honestly. I’m not sure what I missed, but it wasn’t even a moving target.”

XDDD And what a great way to end the chapter. Your cliffhangers always make me want more.

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swyrel May 5 2010, 17:59:52 UTC
Cloud, you jerk! Everyone has been stopped, and you even said yourself, no more Reunions. So why still try to kill him?! And also kill yourself?! Though, I didn't see that part coming, but of course Cloud wouldn't leave himself alive, especially after Jenova took control of him like that.

Oh, cliffhangers, how I hate you so. T_T

Genesis, you just waited for the moment to make your dramatic entrance didn't you? Probably standing outside the whole time listening in to see when the best time to enter would be.

GAH If Cloud dies, then how will anyone find out that Aeris has the cure for Angeal?

You write action so well. ^^

*waits eagerly for the next chapter*

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sinnatious May 6 2010, 11:38:27 UTC
Genesis can't possibly let Vincent take all the dramatic entrances! He has a reputation to uphold. ;)

Thanks. Action is really hard to write, but rather fun at the same time.

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