Hyoutei Roommates: Coping Methods #8: Keganin (Injured Party)

[sinsofwill]

Title: Keganin (Injured Party)
Pairing: Dirty Pair, HiyoMari
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Rating: The Dirty Pair have dirty minds mouths. ^^;
For: chironstar, who asked for a drabble with Mari, Hiyoshi, the Hyoutei regulars, a broom closet, an empty classroom, and Truth or Dare. *giggles

Comments

[aishuu]

Tres cute as always - really love this outside perspective on HiyoMari.

I’m sure a black belt with a gekokujou complex can do a fair amount of damage, when he wants to.

And that completely sums up my thoughts on Hiyoshi's own worst quirk.

I would say, constructively, that it would be easier to read if you put breaks between paragraphs, though.

[sinsofwill]

There's something rather special about having the first comment come from you, though I couldn't tell you what, exactly. <3(And yes, you were indeed right about the p-breaks. I should start writing with them in already. *wince*)

Worst quirk, or best? *wink* For some odd reason, I'm feeling an insane amount of love for Hiyoshi these days. *laugh*

Thank you so much, dear!

[aishuu]

*laughs* I'll try to be more quick at replying. I usually let myself think on your fic before writing - but the breaks got me. (I already write with breaks and in HTML format- it makes life SO much easier.)

I'm so pleased you're happy with the CM universe. <3 More fic for us.

[kisamonkey]

So. I have to tell you, I've been meaning to and this is the perfect opportunity..... Makka is one of my three favorite Dirty pair fics. I've read it maybe 8 times. I love how you write them. And this, this! This is brilliance. Even with all dialogue so can just picture the facial expressions. I hope you write them again in the future! *poke, nudge*

[sinsofwill]

Eeeek, thank you! *blush* Goodness, the smut in that story still makes me red in the face when I think of it...

*laugh* I love the Dirty Pair to absolute bits--they're both so the antithesis of everything I am that it's hilarious to write them. ^_~ Unfortunately, I got them together so early in the Roommates that unless I somehow start over with them, or break them up somehow, I've got nowhere to go with them! *giggles*

Might I ask what your other favourite Dirty Pair fics are? I haven't read any fic for them for awhile, and I'd like to. Hmmm... I'm going to guess that one of them is one of orpheneritus lovely works?

[kisamonkey]

I think *nudge* that you could do them as a sort of parallel arc like you're doing coping methods. Makka to me doesn't really go in the Roommates arc, it's a stand alone, so you could use it as a sort of side arc. Though, I do love the coping methods world too so I wouldn't want you to stop that anytime soon

[midorigirl]

I have to say, I started reading your fics back in 2005 and now that you're writing again, I damn near PERK every time I see your name pop up on my Flist. Your story telling is truly lovely, and I love seeing anything HiyoMari.
I admire you for getting a fic across in nothing but dialogue. I, personally, loathe writing dialogue so to see a story pulled off so brilliantly with nothing but! And in Gakuto's voice no less.

I'll stop being a creepy fangirl now, but seriously...thank you for writing these.

[sinsofwill]

Oh, my. I'm so very flattered you're still reading, after all this time! #^_^# The HiyoMari love I've been feeling from my Flist is just... staggering, and I am so grateful that you gave my crazy het a chance. ^^

Eeee, I'm so happy you liked this! Truth is, dialogue is one of the things I love writing the most, so this came out significantly faster than the traditional-style story I was trying to write. I didn't have to worry about description breaking the conversation or anything. ^^;

Oh, goodness. You're not being the least bit creepy--you're making me smile and boink around the room like Jirou on mocha! ^^ Thank you so much, dear!

[uminohikari]

*squees*

Because Shishido has all the gaydar of a fangirl in denial.”
That line is ♥

Hyoutei’s high school tennis team?

[sinsofwill]

Well, yes, high school... Gakuto fiddled with Mari's skirts on Jirou's eighteenth birthday, so I can only hope they're in high school by that point. *laugh*

I keep seeing Roommates Shishido as lacking gaydar, the poor idiot... well, not that he needs it. ^_~

Eeee, thank you! ^^

[license_points]

“He kinda reached out like he was gonna brush her hair behind her ear for a second, but… nah. They just walked off together.”

“Well, it’d be a gekokujou kind of thing, wouldn’t it, stealing her away from Atobe?”

Yes. Yes, it would. Hurry up, Hiyoshi.

And now that I've calmed down a little... Neat effect, having the story told with just dialog.

[sinsofwill]

Yes. Yes, it would. Hurry up, Hiyoshi.

You've no idea just how cute I found this. ^_______^

Thank you so much, dear! *giggle* I think the Dirty Pair have little enough internal monologue that half the time, all they need is dialogue. ^^