[ficlet: half-price, flashpoint, spike/lew. rated t]

Jun 07, 2009 15:14

Title: Half-Price
Author sionnain
Fandom: Flashpoint
Character/Pairing: Lew, Spike (Spike/Lew if you squint)
Rating: T
Prompt: 110, Conversation
Word Count: 300

AN: Thanks to Waltzforanight for the beta-read! For the Ds_snippets Amnesty Challenge, written for the prompt "conversation". Which I think I used before but you know, amnesty. :D?

Half-Price )

ds_snippets, flashpoint, spike/lew

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china_shop June 8 2009, 03:11:25 UTC
Awwwww! *loves*

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inathunderstorm June 8 2009, 03:16:03 UTC
I wanted them to make out, China! But I ran out of words :(

::glomps you::

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eviltwin June 8 2009, 05:36:27 UTC
Love it! I think you captured them both pretty well and I love the line about Spike knowing when Lew's quiet is a different kind of quiet. Spike's pretty good at putting people in a good mood :)

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inathunderstorm June 8 2009, 14:26:52 UTC
Thank you! I am poking at them with sticks to make them make out for this Porn Battle snippet, and decided maybe they should talk first. ::giggles::

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elandae June 8 2009, 06:30:31 UTC
Totally love this. The balance between Spike and Lew is fabulous and the way you write Spike just makes me smile. Wonderful!

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inathunderstorm June 8 2009, 14:27:04 UTC
Thank you so much! Am very glad you enjoyed it :)

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snoopypez June 8 2009, 21:31:43 UTC
your icon is ADORABLE.

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elandae June 9 2009, 03:08:05 UTC
Aw, thank you! Hard not to be adorable when it's Spiiiike! You're more than welcome to use it if you should like! :)

I love your Ed icon, too. I have one from that same scene, I believe! It's actually almost the exact same shot, actually! So neat.

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iniq June 8 2009, 14:36:15 UTC
This is lovely. Showing the aftermath of their cases. And Spike and Lewis, of course... :D
I love it!
(And now I'm hungry. Mmm, chicken wings.)

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inathunderstorm June 8 2009, 14:36:47 UTC
I know! It is only 9:30 am here but I would so eat some wings. :DDD

And thank you very much!!

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groovekittie June 8 2009, 16:03:26 UTC
I love that Lew always finds out what happens afterwards. Even if it breaks his heart.

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inathunderstorm June 8 2009, 16:07:30 UTC
I do quite love them! I am poking them with sticks to make out, because I think that would make Lew feel EVEN BETTER. :D

thank you!

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