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[fic: what else would you have me be? Mike Sweeney/Ray Kowalski, rated MA]

Jul 17, 2009 11:29

Title: what else would you have me be?
Author: sionnain
Fandom: Due South/Durham County crossover (setting is ambiguous, it's sometime after Season 1; written prior to Season 2, so we'll say AU)
Pairing: Ray Kowalski/Mike Sweeney (background Fraser/Vecchio, a touch of unrequited Fraser/Kowalski)
Rating: MA
Warnings: Kink, specifically S&M. Nothing graphic ( Read more... )

c6d, durham county, dc/ds crossover, mike/ray, fanfiction

Comments 30

lamentables July 17 2009, 18:01:11 UTC

whenever Ray thought about Mike Sweeney and Benton Fraser in the same room, he had to go lie down

Yeah, me too.

You've done interesting things with the pairing. I like the way you've explored Kowalski's jitteriness and Sweeney's anger and found a way for them to relieve the tensions.

inathunderstorm July 17 2009, 19:47:38 UTC

Haha, one day I want to write something where Fraser and Vecchio show up and Kowalski is all O_O. waltzforanight and I figure Mike will be weird and kind of jealous around Fraser.

I think Mike and Vecchio would get along, though :)

And thank you! One reason I love this pairing is their dynamic--IMHO--lends itself very well to kink. Mike Sweeney clearly has sadistic tendencies, and I've always bought masochist!Ray Kowalski, so...it was kind of a natural thing for me to write them this way :)

Also, sorry, I hit "post" instead of enter there, somehow? My brain, man. :D

Thanks so much for reading this!!!

akamine_chan July 17 2009, 23:36:53 UTC

No, no, no. I am not getting dragging into this pairing!

I didn't think this was hot, I didn't think this was well written, I didn't think you nailed both of their characters perfectly, I don't want you to write anymore. Please. The angst is just too much for me.

*hugs you*

\sionnain/!

inathunderstorm July 17 2009, 23:39:23 UTC

HHAHAAHA YESSSSSSSS AKA. YESSSSS. DO NOT RESIST THE SIREN'S SONG. C'MON AND WRITE THIS PAIRING, YOU KNOW YOU WAAAAAAAAAANNA. I KNOW YOU LOVE ANGST MY DARLING ANGST-MUFFIN. :D? :D? D?

::beckons::

::wants aka!Ray/Mike fic::

Thank you! I am really glad to hear that I got their voices down--I like writing Mike but man, he's a seething cauldron of ANGST and RAGE.

(That's totally tempting, y?)

::beams::

\aka!/

sundayscat July 18 2009, 10:34:40 UTC

"Ray takes his coffee and spares the poor kids his lecture, because some things you gotta figure out on your own. Some of the coffee spills over the top and lands on his hand. It burns-Ray hisses out a breath through his teeth-and when he glances up at Mike again, Mike's staring at him like he wants to bend Ray backwards over the row of uncomfortable chairs and fuck him senseless. Ray shifts the coffee to his left hand and raises his right, licking at the small circle of burned skin on his wrist. He holds Mike's gaze the entire time. For a minute, they're staring at each other like there's nothing else in the whole world, so fuck, maybe his lectures don't mean a goddamned thing ( ... )

inathunderstorm July 18 2009, 15:39:22 UTC

Eeee, thank you! I'm so thrilled you liked this (thank you for reading it!! ::laughs:: Such a rando pairing I know) and definitely check out DC--it's AMAZING. <3

I really, really think Ray just wants someone who won't leave him. And I think Mike Sweeney needs someone who's not afraid of the dark part of him (he's the angriest guy ever) and they really would be so hot and angsty together, I can't resist!

Awww! ::blushflail:: Thank you!!

akasha_lilian July 19 2009, 21:17:35 UTC

Oh this story was perfect, it really was! This is going to be one of my favourite pairings from now on, seriously ( ... )

roadrunner1896 July 19 2009, 23:20:40 UTC

This is going to be one of my favourite pairings from now on, seriously!

Mwahahahaha. You are welcome. :D

I also need to rewatch Durham County!!!

We could get on that right after finishing Flashpoint. And hey, DC doesn't even make me that bitchy. ;p

inathunderstorm July 20 2009, 01:36:30 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad to hear you liked it, thank you! I'm glad the voices worked for you. I really love Sadie, it was fun to have her make an appearance :)

Well, I'm definitely a Vecchio girl (my due South OTP is Kowalski/Vecchio) and I totally think Mike and Vecchio would get along. They would talk about sports!

And I'm glad the bag imagery worked--I was hoping that came through and I'm very glad that it did!

There will definitely be more, la, I am a wee bit obsessed.

Thanks again!

roadrunner1896 July 19 2009, 23:19:26 UTC

Now I read this and there is no new Mike/Ray fic for me to look forward too. *sad*

I kind of like Ray and Sadie a lot. I think Ray could really help her and Mike figure stuff out.

I am glad so much plot happened to wrap around the porn. I enjoyed reading this a lot.

Also, yes, have Fraser and Vecchio visit. That will be fun. And it will also mean more DC/DS crossover for me. :D

inathunderstorm July 20 2009, 01:33:37 UTC

Haha, don't worry, there will be more! I am so super thrilled that people like this pairing, yay!!

I think Sadie and Ray are seriously going to be BFFS. ::draws hearts::

I think Vecchio and Mike will get along, and Fraser will just make Mike go O.O

::giggles::

Thank you!

roadrunner1896 July 20 2009, 05:59:16 UTC

YAY! more.

It is a fun pairing. More people should try it and more would like it, I am sure. :D

I think Sadie and Ray are seriously going to be BFFS. ::draws hearts::

Yes. *draws some more hearts*

I think Vecchio and Mike will get along, and Fraser will just make Mike go O.O

Yes! *giggles, too and prepares to stalk you to the ends of the Earth for more fic* :D