Oh noes two posts in one night!

[sirencio]

Ok, so there's that "Erotic Poetry Open Mic" in Manchester tomorrow night. I've whipped something up for it that I hope is both very funny and very dirty. I haven't been so successful at writing in quite a while, and I really try not to post poetry to my journal because it's usually comment death... but I could use some quick feedback to

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[lakilika]

You rogue.

[sirencio]

You know it.

My current ladyish friend also approved, but said it could be dirtier!

[shalarb]

i like it

[sirencio]

Thanks :)