FIC: The Portrait of Stella Black/The Favourite Son

Nov 01, 2005 21:24

Title: The Portrait of Stella Black/The Favourite Son
Author: me, theenginedriver, aka, jedibix783
Rating: PG-13 or thereabouts
Warnings: One batsh*t insane character, death, child abuse
Characters: Sirius, Regulus, and parents
Summary/Challenge: Sirius's mother takes her son with her to have her portrait painted. The challenge was #21, Sirius's childhood before he came ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 17

(The comment has been removed)

theenginedriver November 8 2005, 06:23:35 UTC
Reading Dorian Gray should explain things a bit more... although I was intentionally vague. Thank you so much for the kind comment!

Reply

atlantis_z13 November 14 2005, 08:44:20 UTC
Dude Dorian Gray rocks!! As do you! I love this, I love the crazy and the creepy sexy and the fucked up relationships between everyone, its perfect! I have told you this already but you know here's me saying it again.

Reply


guns_and_butter November 2 2005, 04:03:03 UTC
This is so unbelievably powerful, it boggles the mind.

My mouth was gaping through half of it; I believe I was whimpering at one point. The interaction between Sirius and his beautiful, devious, batsh*t f*cking insane mother...I've been rendered speechless.

“When you are older, I will teach you when it is appropriate to determine if a member of the House of Black has outlived his or her usefulness.” < -- This is the point where I absolutely lost my mind.

“You weren’t always,” his father said, just as calmly as if they were having a chat over tea; Sirius had both his hands to his face, feeling the sticky blood coming from his cheek and trying to cover the sudden ringing in his ear. “And you won’t be forever.” < -- And that would be where I stopped breathing.

I'm going to go have nightmares, now. Excellent work.

Reply

theenginedriver November 8 2005, 06:24:27 UTC
Hehe, thank you! I enjoy handing out nightmares :).

Reply


forever__rain November 2 2005, 04:51:43 UTC
this is awsome, i love the relation ship between him and his mom

Reply

theenginedriver November 8 2005, 06:24:44 UTC
Thanks!

Reply


You, my darling, have some nice lines jazzypom November 2 2005, 07:44:59 UTC
Some really nice lines. *nods*

From Sirius' mother smelling like the Artic, to her perfume smelling like peppermint over something wild like a forest after rainfall...

such nice lines.

I had to read the story three times to get it.

Well done.

*claps*

Reply

Re: You, my darling, have some nice lines theenginedriver November 8 2005, 06:25:49 UTC
Thank you! :) And thanks for having the patience to read it three times!

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

theenginedriver November 8 2005, 06:26:46 UTC
Very good.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up