Something so Inevitable

[skarob]

I took her hand, her fingers curling around my hand, grasping so tight I felt my bones would crack and shatter. She looked me in the eyes. Hate burned in that stare, cold dead hate. I had to look away. Her other hand slowly stroked my face, the backs of her fingers drifting across my stubble, catching and rubbing. She smiled. I can't tell if there'

Comments

[cryurchin]

hey bro. quite a community u got going on here :) loadsa people loving ur stuff :) i dont think im spending enough time on here, still only get a few hits to my work, but its all good, my friends all see it. just wondered if u'd read my recent story, think it might be up ur alley. i think its cool you get negative criticism to, cos u know guys/girls like that post above just inspire you to write more :) laters mate x

[skarob]

yeah, loved it, the rework really tied it off better i feel. And the neg crit only amuses rather than offends!

[ferrus_mortis]

Although your writting is great, almost everyone I know can breath through a pillow.

[trasck]

his 'writting'? Yes, I like skarob his 'writting' too! :')

[skarob]

i'm glad u both liked it! and who said he couldn't breathe?

[used_lover89]

wow...
i agree with the one up there^^^ somewhere...
you make ppl think.
lol theres a whole convo here as proof.
keep it up, im friending you so i can read ur future stuff
<3

[skarob]

cool, am real glad u liked it!

[gloomy_eyes_9]

I love your poetry, you're amazing :)

[skarob]

thank you, am blushing!

[tarheelsgurl]

Wow, I'm truly intrigued...must read more. Ur stuff really makes me think and it has alot of meaning. U have real talent.

-Melissa

[skarob]

thank you! i always try to have ambiguous meanings in what i write. What did u think happened in this one?