Consequences

Aug 15, 2005 19:08

The girl woke with a start. Her eyes were frantic with terror, seeking out something, anything. Bloody fingers scratched at the tape over her mouth, pulling it free, a scream escaping as it rolled back. Then tears came, thick and flowing, mixing with the blood, staining her skin pink. She slowly slowed, gulping for air, looking around her. The room ( Read more... )

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ferrus_mortis August 15 2005, 23:33:42 UTC
*Applause*
but the part of me that indicates human protecol says "you sick fuck"
But I rarely listen to that part of me.
*more Applause*

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skarob August 16 2005, 11:55:14 UTC
i get that a lot. but the more interesting question is what part of a person decides what is sick or wrong? is it an inbuilt idea or merely something that society instills in us?

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ferrus_mortis August 17 2005, 02:40:54 UTC
I believe it's conditioning of some kind that causes a social stigma to be placed on those who do not conform, but i'm not sure how...
In this case I'd guess it was the "taking pleasure in anothers pain" that seems evil.
reality is weird.

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x_no_tomorrow_x August 16 2005, 02:19:30 UTC
that's so cool.
it definately reminds me of the movie Saw.

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skarob August 16 2005, 11:52:03 UTC
cool, i loved that movie, just didnt see the twists coming which is a rarity!

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ambereternal August 16 2005, 16:12:13 UTC
I always love reading what you write. At first it made me think of "Saw" but now I'm thinking more along the lines of "8mm" and a snuff film.

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skarob August 17 2005, 10:05:04 UTC
cool, am humbled with such comparisons!

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skinnidip August 22 2005, 21:05:28 UTC
Super Orgy Porno Party

Now everybody's welcome at the party tonight

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//end random

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cryurchin August 24 2005, 16:09:20 UTC
interesting as always bro. hows tricks by the way? alls good here, nothing much doing though. hopefully i'll have some new writing up soon. my last post was just neo-porn :s laters x

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skarob September 4 2005, 12:09:08 UTC
nothing wrong with a good bit of neo-porn....

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