Falling

Apr 01, 2007 02:43

The weight of the world bearing down.
Being pulled in every direction.
Trying to fight the negative.

How do I stop the descent?

Can't be far the bottom.
Searching for a way out.
Gasping for air.

When will it come to an end?

Karma seeking revenge.
Paying for sins.
Accepting the hand dealt.

How do I rise again?

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umbreons_shadow April 1 2007, 09:36:59 UTC
beautiful and yet, sad....

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ski11181 April 1 2007, 09:41:16 UTC
Thank you. I want to let you know I appreciate you commenting on my writing. I am usually not very good at responding to comments. I just thought I would let you know I enjoy the feedback.

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umbreons_shadow April 2 2007, 07:20:59 UTC
You're most welcomed. :D

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