Through Sickness and Health, Part 5

[skipturnstep]

Title: Through Sickness and Health, Part 5
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 4,335
Summary: Flashbacks of the ups and downs of Kyuhyun and Donghae's relationship, told in five parts.
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4

Comments

[scovilleunit]

YAAAAAY SPOT <3

[scovilleunit]

THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL. ;__________;

I can’t function properly without you - it’s like you’re one of my vital organs.”

Kyuhyun chuckled. “Your penis.”

KYU ILYSFM XDDDDDD

Sequel pleassseeee! <3333

[skipturnstep]

^_____^ Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

XD It's amazing the things I come up with at 6AM, running on no sleep...

And don't worry! I do have a sequel planned for this! ^__^ Thanks so much for your support.

[nabiyun]

OMG,I love this TT^TT Though it's a pity it's the end,but this one of the best Kyuhae I've read :) You really have an amazing talent :) I'll be waiting for your next storys ;)

[skipturnstep]

Thank you so much! ^___^ I actually have a sequel for this fic planned so be on the lookout!

[nabiyun]

A sequel? I can't wait ^^

[bonomanic]

I really don't want this to be over. I know the relief and happiness that comes with finishing a story you've been working on hard, but I still can't help wanting more. I loved the everyday details you put in this most, things that seemed so random but made such a great difference, so now I'm craving for an outtake of their daily lives sometime later, during SS2, before Bonamana era, something. Lol, I'm sorry I'm being like this - I have a hard time letting go of stories that made me feel so much for their protagonists and put me through emotional rollercoasters

[skipturnstep]

Thank you so much for reading! Even I'm sad this is over, even though by thnow it's cost me many a nights' sleep.

I spent a lot of time analyzing these two, watching video after video so i could maybe get into their minds a bit. Kyuhyun's was like second nature since we have a lot in common, but Donghae's was a little more difficult. I'm glad I got it down right ^^

I've always felt very strongly about Eunhae's friendhip. I feel as if they really are like two halves of the same person but instead of lovers, theyre beat friends.

Also, don't worry too much aboit this being over -- I do have a 'sequel' of sorts planned, kind of like an epilogue, that takes them into their daily life. It takes place after Bonamana though ^^;

Thank you again for reading! It means a lot to me.

[bonomanic]

I guess you just can't help to get fond of the story and its characters, no matter if you're the author or the reader. ^^ And especially when you spent so much time developing them for yourself as you said. I've started to watch vids looking out for how they present themselves and glimpses at their thoughts as well, watching how they interact with others and with the camera and what that tells me about them. But recently, I haven't had as much time for it as I'd have liked. Stupid uni, giving me tons of work even when it's over. :( I guess I'll have to watch a lot more vids until I finally get a grip on my personal Donghae - although trying to write him helped a bit already, I could test out what felt right and what didn't. Maybe I'll have to come back to you one day to talk about character development for him, he's hard to pinpoint, that fishy

[skipturnstep]

Oh don't hesitate to come to me! I'd love to be of help :D Developing Donghae was one of the harder points of writing this, I know how difficult his personality can be at this point. If it helps you avoid the stress I went through developing him, I'd be happy to help ^^;

I haven't seen the dancing cuts yet XD But yes, it gives me a little more freedom with what I want to write. I'm not sure exactly what's going to play out with it, whether it's going to be an actual plot or if it's just going to be an overview of their lives, but I'll try and make it worth reading ^__^

Oh god, my other Kyuhae fic is horrible D: It was the first fic I had written in like...two years. It's tragic. And half-smut. And Kyuhyun calls Donghae 'oppa' XD But if you must, go right ahead. XD

And don't worry, even after this fic is over for real, this won't be the last Kyuhae you see out of me -- they're one of my favorite pairings and I really love the contrast in their personalities They're so much fun to write. ^__^

[breathless93]

omg! i loved this so much! although you just got me into suju i LOVED it good job!!<3333

[ex_digitalb]

;________; it's over and i'm so sad about that.

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I love how you captured Donghae so perfectly in this, and along with him his insecurity and uncertainty. Beautiful. ♥ I'm glad that there was no miraculous "OMG MAKEOUT AND I LOVE YOU AGAIN" type ending, and that it stuck to reality but didn't fail to make my heart flutter.

;___; I'll miss this series, so I hope to see your writing again

[skipturnstep]

^__^ Thank you so much! I've never been a fan of fics that involve a break-up, and then suddenly there's an accidental makeout session/they end up sleeping together somehow and they're back together. It seems too much like a fairy tale, and even though this had a happy ending, I needed it to be more realistic, you know?

Oh, and PS?

I'm writing a sequel. ^-^

[ex_digitalb]

I totally understand. Life's not a shojo manga...-sigh-

lsdkhlsdhkg yay! Looking forward to it! ♥