Feel free to tell me what you think of my Sheena. Suggestions are always helpful, so feel free to leave any constructive criticism and the like.

IP logging off, comment screening on, and anonymous enabled~ Have at it.  Excuse me if the flirts are bad ahhh. ;;;;;

[Bordering along the forest and to the village is a young, blond-haired man looking lost like most New Feathers. The standard cotton trousers and book is tucked underneath his arm yes he is dressed, though he takes the book out to flip through it.]

What, no map or anything? That's useless. [He puts the book to his side but doesn't close it. He ( Read more... )