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skk670

Undercover Angel, Part VI (3) - The New Dawn

Apr 23, 2006 14:26

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sitebuilderchic April 23 2006, 21:20:50 UTC

awww!!!! this was an amazing story! i can barely believe it! it ties together so well and its so twisted and dark, its so cool. i'm now gonna go back and add all the chapters to my memories. this rocks and you should totally be a screenwriter someday!

skk670 April 24 2006, 00:26:38 UTC

Thank you. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I appreciate you leaving feedback.

anonymous April 23 2006, 22:22:21 UTC

amazing and dark.
just the way i like it!!!
I'm confused, is Logan the father?

skk670 April 24 2006, 00:28:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Wow, Logan as Lilly's father? I would like to think that Logan would remember sleeping with Meg. No, neither Logan nor Duncan are Lilly Manning's father in this fic.

zeldafitzgerald April 23 2006, 22:31:26 UTC

This is amazing. I say that for a lot of fanfic, but this is serious. The plot and mystery and everything is seamless. You did a perfect job and I loved how you weaved stuff from newer episodes into your story to make it that much more real. This is seriously the best VM fic I've ever read because it totally encompassing everything that Rob and Co. stand for. Superb job.

skk670 April 24 2006, 00:30:37 UTC

Thank you. I ended up a totally different place than where I think RT is going. But I wanted to use the first 12 episodes as the clues for my mystery. Luckily, RT added things in later episodes that just slid right in.

Thank you for leaving feedback.

lilyfarfalla April 23 2006, 22:44:03 UTC

I kind-of love this ending a lot. But the whole story was a lot of fun to read! Good job putting together a solution for all of the mysteries this season.

skk670 April 24 2006, 00:32:56 UTC

I know some people will be disappointed with the ending because Logan and Veronica are not together. I think it is more realistic and poignant this way. The door is open, physically and metaphorically. It feels hopeful, right?

Thank you for leaving feedback. I really appreciate it.

lilyfarfalla April 24 2006, 01:02:41 UTC

Yeah, I'm a total sucker for the open-ended, hopeful conclusion.

endlessxwinter April 23 2006, 23:23:20 UTC

epilogue??? PLEASE.

this has SERIOUSLY, the best plot i have ever read.
i could not WAIT for the chapters, and now that it's over, i'm kinda sad. lol.

skk670 April 24 2006, 00:35:29 UTC

I really wanted to write it as the 10 - 12 chapters I had planned originally. It would have been Logan gathering clues and trailing people. But - alas - I just don't have the time. I hope the resolution was satisfying for you.

Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback.

endlessxwinter April 24 2006, 00:38:21 UTC

your welcome, credit where credit's due and all that!!

i loved the ending!!

and i hear ya on not having the time.