fic; 'A Snog Between Mates', X Factor 2010 RPS; Harry/Niall; [1/1]

[sky_somedays]

Title: A Snog Between Mates
Fandom: X Factor 2010 RPS
Pairing: Harry Styles/Niall Horan (One Direction)
Rating: PG
Summary: Niall inexplicably goes to find Harry, gets sidetracked by sleep. Kissing and dodgy dialogue occurs.
Word count: 1,756
Disclaimer: This never happened, I'm just having fun, don't sue me. :D
A/N: AGHGHHG my first fic for this fandom.

Comments

[ilikehumanflesh]

Definitely an unlikely pairing (even though I am quite the OT5 shipper) but I totally love this. I love how they just talk about everything, it's not like they automatically jump all over each other. Niall's laughing after the first kiss, too precious.

Mates who snogged <3 And they're going to snog again. and omg <3

[sky_somedays]

:D Glad you liked! Harry/Niall is one of the less obvious ones I agree. For some reason it was my favourite before I found the fandom, and now I'm more of the OT5 persuasion idk. This was my first review for like two years as well, so thank you again bb!

<3

[untouchablerave]

OH GOD DYING.

And Niall called him "darlin'" - BRB, SQUEEING LIKE A FANGIRL.

You write SO well. I never thought of this pairing before really but I actually loved it!

[sky_somedays]

:D Thank you so much! This pairing is a bit random, it was my favourite when I first started watching their video diaries. Idk why, they're just so smishable!

<3

[sashapotter]

Aww, this is so damn precious. Harry/Niall are so adorable and their banter is too cute.
LOve it.
:)

[sky_somedays]

Thank you! :D Glad the banter was okay, I tend to go dialogue-heavy for no reason :)

<3

[sky_somedays]

:) I totes agree, OT5 all the way. But I have a soft spot Niall/Harry. Thanks for reading!

<3

[wirepatch]

I really enjoyed this; I love your style of writing. You make gorgeous sentences that flow really nicely and all of the sentiments came across perfectly. I love the interaction between the two of them, it's not loaded or obviously leading up to a kiss (so that comes as a nice little surprise) and the conversation feels really honest the whole way through.

This had made Niall uncomfortable at first, the constant, offhand intimacy. All four of his band mates seemed to have this need to always be touching; each other, him, their friends in the house.

Loved this line. As much as I adore all the touching, it's nice to see it from a perspective of someone who isn't just being okay with it straight away and is instead thinking "yeah, this is a bit weird because we've all only just met". ♥

[sky_somedays]

Wow, thank you so much! Grinning so hard rn. I'm so happy you liked it! And that the emotion came across, I was worried it might get a bit lost in the random ~banter~. And also, for actually taking the time to quote, ♥! Seriously thank you, bb.

<3