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Sep 21, 2007 14:47

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lover_of_anime September 21 2007, 19:22:38 UTC

nice

ericana September 21 2007, 19:24:36 UTC

thanks

chaoward September 21 2007, 19:35:08 UTC

i dig the repetition of this piece; especially how you tend to lead into the next sentence with what seems to be the intent or general feeling of the previous statement. good wordplay and fantastic ending line

littlegreen33 September 21 2007, 19:49:32 UTC

Very nice. I think the stream of thought vibe is a great effect.