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Aug 30, 2011 23:43

█ ✫ INSIDE OUT ··· ( ch 5 of ? )
█ pairing: jongkey, minkey
█ rating: NC-17 (This chapter rated NC-17 - WARNING: Adult Content)
█ genre: drama - romance
✫ ··· chapter index
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four

✫ ··· author's note: This chapter took a long time to come out. Damn you, writer's block. It's a little longer than I was intending, ( Read more... )

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slapstickhero August 31 2011, 03:44:21 UTC
█ ✫ spot for lovestrucksmile

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lovestrucksmile May 6 2012, 21:16:19 UTC

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slapstickhero August 31 2011, 03:44:38 UTC
█ ✫ spot for rudyard

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rudyard September 1 2011, 16:59:44 UTC
YOU SHOULD HAVE LIKE 100 COMMENTS ON THIS FIC. I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS AWESOMENESS AND I NEVER WILL.

;~; THIS PRECIOUS
I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER FOREVER
AND
EVER
AND
EVER
TBQH, I THINK I AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN BECAUSE I ALWAYS ASK YOU AND PUSH YOU TO WRITE MORE AND MORE AND MORE OF INSIDE OUT.

/sigh
the way things are looking so far for Minho,Key and Jonghyun. this is just drama city and hopefully it ends peacefully.

;___;

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slapstickhero September 1 2011, 17:07:20 UTC
CAIBB ALL OF THIS PRAISE IS GOING TO GIVE ME SUCH A FAT HEAD YOU NEED TO STOP OKAY? lol~

But seriously, if it wasn't for you and everyone else asking me to write more, it would take me forever to get chapters out. I'm writing it because I enjoy it, but I'm trying to do it at a steady pace because I want other people to like it, too! Cx So your cheer-leading and stuff is so helpful, you don't even know, okay~ ❤

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artificiallilac August 31 2011, 04:18:30 UTC
I don't know what to do with myself or this story anymore. Who am I supposed to take my anger out on?? Jonghyun, Key, Minho, all are so well thought out, perfectly written, and just so freaking pitiful--I don't know who I should be mad at anymore!

Why does Key let Jonghyun hurt him? How can someone bury themselves so deeply into ones being that it hurts that much? Why does Jonghyun go back to Sekyung if he loves Key? So what if going to her makes him forget the anguish, Jonghyun knows it's not the right thing and it certainly doesn't makes things better in the long run--where it counts.
And Minho---I don't even know what to say about him.
Or anything else because your writing kind of does that to me (I've said it so many times too!)
But yeah.
Thank you so much for sharing!! :)

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slapstickhero September 1 2011, 04:08:29 UTC
x /// x

I know this chapter leaves a lot of loose ends, but I promise they start tying off in the next chapter. This story is actually winding down, believe it or not; the climax is coming, and then from there it's all resolution.

And I know I've been saying it for like 3-4 chapters now, but Jonghyun has his reasons. They're not logical, and they're not moral, but they're all he has at this point. :C

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lunathunderhead August 31 2011, 04:22:11 UTC
Punches this whole fic in the face. Out of love.

Ugh, oh God, I don't even know where to begin so I won't, and just settle on saying that this is just so many shades of perfect.

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slapstickhero September 1 2011, 04:10:46 UTC
I know it's frustrating! Things will get better - maybe not for everyone, but they will. Slowly. x3

I can't even with these compliments, seriously. X __ X

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ittybittydaiyu August 31 2011, 07:23:01 UTC

Omg I need more!
Okay so key me get this straight
Jjong is a selfish whore
Minho cares but jjong is to blind to even let key be happy
Then when he says he loves key he turns around and texts her? Wdf
Ridiculous
I'm so pissed at jjong
And Minho you deserve key.
So I mean where is this going?????
I'm soooooo needing to know.

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slapstickhero September 1 2011, 04:11:58 UTC
Yyyyyyyyyup, that's about it. LOL. There are a few more layers, but on the surface, that's pretty much the gist of it.

You'll find out soon enough! I shan't spoil it for you. :P

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