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Oct 27, 2011 02:00

█ ✫ TREASURE HUNTING ··· ( oneshot )
█ pairing: Onho
█ rating: PG-13
█ genre: Romance

█ summary:
Minho collects only the finest of what Jinki has to offer.

What he truly desires are the moans. )

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giichamainimore October 27 2011, 10:11:04 UTC
This is beautiful!!
Beautiful Onho <3

thanks for sharing ^^

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slapstickhero October 29 2011, 20:27:48 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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rudyard October 27 2011, 10:52:52 UTC
Spot for me ;;

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owlus February 28 2012, 04:22:01 UTC
I cannot keep spotting and not commenting LMAO

The way you paint things in my mind. Ide. You are this artist, this brilliant artist and all you do is pick up that brush and a few strokes and I am gone into your painting, your mural of feelings. All of this is so real and perfect and genuine and I can FEEL IT. I literally feel it in my heart. That means so much and you know it ;;

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nalkae October 27 2011, 13:00:33 UTC
this was so beautiful ♥ really loved it^^; thank you for posting/writing it :D

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slapstickhero October 29 2011, 20:28:16 UTC
Nono, thank you for reading! > 3

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volatileflame October 27 2011, 20:09:32 UTC
this was so lovely and the imagery and metaphors were so poignant :)

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slapstickhero October 29 2011, 20:31:48 UTC
Thank you! I overuse metaphors without apology, so I'm glad you didn't find them overwhelming. x 3x

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imvus October 28 2011, 03:23:19 UTC
I will be back tomorrow to read this. :)

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imvus November 27 2011, 04:00:24 UTC
Just kill me now, I lost track of my inbox and missed coming back for this...uggghhh!

This is beautiful beyond measure! Your ability to put into words these imagines are soooooo amazing.

My comment could never be worthy of this wonderful writing!

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slapstickhero November 28 2011, 04:58:04 UTC
TT___TT You are too much sometimes I swear.

Thank you as always! I feel unworthy of your loyalty, but I will earn it one day!

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imvus November 28 2011, 05:13:47 UTC
you guys (all my favorite writers) are all so unaware of how good you guys are. I am an emotional reader and I get attached to the stories ( always been like that... Steven King, Ray Bradbury..like one book and was hooked..lol)

your writing is very poetic...the imagery is beautiful (there's only one other writer that I have seen that writes like that on here)

And you trust me you. have already earned it. :)

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