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FIC: Oakdale is Not So Bad - Part 6

Jan 10, 2013 22:33

Title: Oakdale is Not So Bad - Part 6
Author: sleeper6
Characters: Reid/Luke
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All belongs to As the World Turns, not me.
Summary: Sequel to Dad is Not So Bad. After Reid moves to Oakdale to be with Luke, he has trouble adjusting to his new life and relationship.

Previous: Part 1/ Part 2/ Part 3/ Part 4/ Part 5

( Luke and Reid talk and talk and talk )

reid oliver, fic, lure, atwt, luke snyder, chris/katie

Comments 28

sajaal January 14 2013, 01:52:23 UTC

Wow, that was a lot of ground covered in this chapter, but I get it they needed to discuss what they mean to each other and it's crazy how they want the same things but then don't....

“I know you’re new to relationships so I need to learn to give you time and space to adjust,” Luke said.

“Even if it makes you feel like shit?”

Luke shrugged and looked down at his hands. “It’ll get better.”

“Is that what you told yourself all that time you were with him?”

This was so how Luke was with Noah, just taking the crap I'm happy that Reid called him out on it and told him that he is not Noah....

I still see some angst ahead as Luke and Reid argue over Reid's talking to Bob...

Great update!!!

sleeper6 February 2 2013, 17:47:20 UTC

I got carried away with their conversation but I was tired of putting the guys through so much. They had to get this all out once and for all.

Reid is so not Noah and we're all grateful for that. :)

There might be some angst or maybe not.

Thanks!

sylnl January 14 2013, 10:54:39 UTC

*Seriously, you’re not going to get me to talk like that again for a long while. I’ve exceeded my limit for the next two years at least.*

This chapter was SO real and SO honest AND it had humor...so obviously...I loved it ;-) xxx

sleeper6 February 2 2013, 03:22:19 UTC

Wow, that's such a great comment! Thank you!

And I don't know if you're reading LJ but I'm hoping you get better very, very soon. *hugs* :)

fremi08 January 14 2013, 12:25:40 UTC

Terrific update! Loved every word.

sleeper6 February 2 2013, 03:21:24 UTC

Thank you!

ltklo January 23 2013, 01:46:19 UTC

“I am. Seriously, you’re not going to get me to talk like that again for a long while. I’ve exceeded my limit for the next two years at least.”

Seriously, this was a lot of honest talk for a soap couple! LOL!

sleeper6 February 2 2013, 03:56:15 UTC

It was a lot of talk, right? Ha ha. I confess--I enjoy writing dialogue way more than I do descriptions and inner thoughts and such so yes, I do get carried away. But well, they had to say what they had to say so they can move on.

Thanks for reading!

ltklo February 2 2013, 14:30:57 UTC

Don't misunderstand. I loved the dialogue. It's just that soaps thrive on misunderstanding because of what people do not say :) And that really just struck me when I read this chapter.