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brittany2922 December 24 2010, 14:41:11 UTC
Awesome Update! I'm glad this seems to be the end to the Dollie relationship, and I can't wait for Chloe to make an appearance!

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kcsgirl82 December 24 2010, 16:03:59 UTC
I loved it!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
I am curious to find out why Chloe stayed away and why she left in the first place. Part of me wonders if she did try to find Ollie and saw that he had moved on to Dinah and didn't want to mess things up for him because she assumed he was now in love with Dinah.
Thanks so much for the awesome update!!!

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lilacs_roses December 24 2010, 17:41:17 UTC
Just started reading this and... wow. Very nicely crafted. Looking forward to more!

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nienna87 December 24 2010, 19:08:20 UTC
I feel awful for Dinah. And kinda mad at Oliver for not standing up sooner and telling her that it wasn't going to work. He's will always love Chloe and its not fair to her to try get married and try to have a life when she's only second best.

I'm so glad that Victor talked some sense into Ollie. and that he's so confident he can find his son. That was a cool scene to see them talk like that. Lovely chapter!

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chlollie_86 December 24 2010, 21:09:31 UTC
That was so good, but sad. I do feel bad for Dinah and what she went through. With that being said now Oliver can really focus on finding Chloe and their son without feeling so guilty about it. More please!

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danisige December 25 2010, 16:59:00 UTC
They broke up, I know that Dinah went out hurt, but Oliver is trying to regain his life, has still many unanswered questions to him, and is very important that he find these, for him to have peace.
The broke up reminded me so much their ending in the comics, what Vic said that he never able to fully open to Dinah, there were always lies, and the only one with whom he has always been 100% honest, was with Chloe, was similar with what Dinah told to Oliver in the comics. It really seems that the problems of Oliver in the comics come from that love which he and Chloe had lived, one is always waiting the return of the other.

I'm hoping he find her, and also find his child, I'm curious to know how this will happen. :)

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