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spoiler11 January 6 2011, 19:26:09 UTC
Oh my gosh, I found this chapter so heartbreaking. Heartbreaking for Dinah and heartbreaking for Ollie...:(
And I actually had tears in my eyes for Dinah!
You are such a wicked writer, I mean you had me crying over Dinah! I hate Dinah... well I did before I read this. Now I feel sorry for her..... and now I feel depressed! ;)

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handhrules August 15 2011, 22:48:51 UTC
ok...so in less than 5 chapters you turned me from not liking her, to utterly feeling bad for her.

-_- BUT this means he can focus on Chloe!

AND I LOVE protective Father Ollie! it's so adorable.

Perfection dude....Perfection

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lionhearted_21 September 4 2011, 04:41:18 UTC
This is such a fantastic story, the writing is amazing (I feel badly for a character I don't even like), and the pacing is just perfect!

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kyizi December 8 2011, 20:55:18 UTC
God, I was right, I can't believe I've found a fic where I kind of hate Oliver a little and feel so sorry for Dinah! And it's actually not just the break up with Oliver, because she probably always knew deep down, it's the loss of something she never knew she even wanted and how she found out she could never have it. That just breaks my heart!

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syl77 August 1 2012, 15:26:44 UTC
Awwwww. My heart is actually so sad for Dinah! :(

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