Oh wow intense chapter...! I loved the chat with Hal, especially the part where Oliver talks so fondly about her. See now that Dinah is out of the picture I'm curious as to what the next main obstacle or conflict in question will be...whether it'll do with Chloe's reason for leaving, or other people in Chloe's new life or even just the strain of making an arrangement or relationship work again.. Can't wait to find out what her reason for leaving is! She's a tough person and so I'd guess it wouldnt be something like she had to protect the boy from their dangerous lives, or from Oliver, or other crap like that..but I've been wrong before so I'll just wait and find out..:D Oliver's reaction is gonna be interesting as well...it really could go either way since he seems so conflicted bout how it'll go down. Love it so far keep going..! :))
Please update like...right now lol. They found Chloe. Oh I can't wait before Oliver sees her again. And his son of course. Loved the interaction with Hal.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Post te next cap already!!!!!!!!!! Seriously! . . On comics the friendship between Hal and Ollie is one of y favorites things ever, they fight, they jokes, but in the end Hal is ALWAYS there to Oliver. As much Ollie to him, its soooo great read Chlollie fics that explores that, and you guys are awesome, since I knowing your job with them on FWB. . Secret: Asmuch I'm looking for Ollie's reaction to Chloe, I'm even more excited to see Hal's reaction about her *_________* I already ca imagine beautiful thing to him to say (and funny ones that would make Ollie snap his head, ahahahaha) . POST THE NEXT CAP ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASE!
Oh you're nasty. A new years gift is a cliffhanger? At least we know what's going to happen next update. I really love everything you addressed in this chapter. All the questions Oliver had, it was nice to see he wasn't the only one thinking about that. And while Vic was hurt, he defended Chloe to Hal. Loved that! And I like that Hal was curious enough about her to ask. It's fantastic how well you guys have captured Ryan Reynold's Hal. I could hear him saying all those lines and picture his expressions. You can see how deep the friendship goes.
Oliver recounting Chloe and his relationship, how he saw her, the things he speculated on. Loved it. You can feel is loneliness, his frustration and his heartbreak. I can't wait till he mets his son. I know I'm probably going to cry but I love it. This kid is a part of him and Chloe. He already loves him and hates the fact that he's missed so much.
Amazing Chapter, I know I've said this before but I really love that you put Hal in this story. I'm really enjoying the interaction between him and Oliver, and I'm excited to see what his reaction to Chloe is since he's never known her and has had to watch his best friend's misery over the loss of her for so long.
Yay Victor found them!!!! I gotta say though that that cliff hanger was evil. I can't wait until the next update.
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On comics the friendship between Hal and Ollie is one of y favorites things ever, they fight, they jokes, but in the end Hal is ALWAYS there to Oliver. As much Ollie to him, its soooo great read Chlollie fics that explores that, and you guys are awesome, since I knowing your job with them on FWB.
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Secret: Asmuch I'm looking for Ollie's reaction to Chloe, I'm even more excited to see Hal's reaction about her *_________* I already ca imagine beautiful thing to him to say (and funny ones that would make Ollie snap his head, ahahahaha)
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POST THE NEXT CAP ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASE!
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Oliver recounting Chloe and his relationship, how he saw her, the things he speculated on. Loved it. You can feel is loneliness, his frustration and his heartbreak. I can't wait till he mets his son. I know I'm probably going to cry but I love it. This kid is a part of him and Chloe. He already loves him and hates the fact that he's missed so much.
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Yay Victor found them!!!! I gotta say though that that cliff hanger was evil. I can't wait until the next update.
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