Ohhh man, you can't stop here. I'm like freaking out squeeeee!!
I love the way you write Hal. He's such an amazing friend and I wish that he could be a part of canon Smallville, Oliver could really need a guy like him as a friend.
I can't wait to see what the story is about Chloe leaving and staying away for this long. I'm also looking forward to Olivers first meeting with not only her but with his son too.
Ohh and kudos to you girls for making Victor such an integral part of this story so far. I know he is the tech-guy and therefore needed in the search for Chloe. But I love him so much for his loyalty and dedicating to his friends and you guys have really managed to show that with few but very effective sentences. In Smallville stories it's often Bart or AC whos getting the "supporting actor" attention. Bart because he's funny and AC because he's paired with Dinah, so it's just really nice to see that Victor gets to shine too..:)
OMG! What Oliver will do now, while it was only a possibility was one thing, but now he knows where they are for real, everything changes and from the moment he meet them face to face everything will be different.
Can't wait for the next chapter, the reunion of them will be very intense. :)
aw ladies how can you leave it there? nooooooooooo........................
as always your writing continues to have me in awe...fantastic story
As mentioned in FWB I love how you write Hal and again in this I find myself really enjoying Hal and Victor. As some others have said I even felt sympathy for Dinah in the earlier chapters which is nothing short of a miracle! and we haven't even had any Chloe interaction yet...
now they have been found I cant wait for what happens next - I find myself needing to know Where they are, Why she left, How she couldn't tell Ollie about his so and Who she may be with now...hmm way to many questions :-)
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I love the way you write Hal. He's such an amazing friend and I wish that he could be a part of canon Smallville, Oliver could really need a guy like him as a friend.
I can't wait to see what the story is about Chloe leaving and staying away for this long. I'm also looking forward to Olivers first meeting with not only her but with his son too.
Ohh and kudos to you girls for making Victor such an integral part of this story so far. I know he is the tech-guy and therefore needed in the search for Chloe. But I love him so much for his loyalty and dedicating to his friends and you guys have really managed to show that with few but very effective sentences. In Smallville stories it's often Bart or AC whos getting the "supporting actor" attention. Bart because he's funny and AC because he's paired with Dinah, so it's just really nice to see that Victor gets to shine too..:)
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OMG! What Oliver will do now, while it was only a possibility was one thing, but now he knows where they are for real, everything changes and from the moment he meet them face to face everything will be different.
Can't wait for the next chapter, the reunion of them will be very intense. :)
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Evil cliffie!!!
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as always your writing continues to have me in awe...fantastic story
As mentioned in FWB I love how you write Hal and again in this I find myself really enjoying Hal and Victor. As some others have said I even felt sympathy for Dinah in the earlier chapters which is nothing short of a miracle! and we haven't even had any Chloe interaction yet...
now they have been found I cant wait for what happens next - I find myself needing to know Where they are, Why she left, How she couldn't tell Ollie about his so and Who she may be with now...hmm way to many questions :-)
just wow.....next chapter please :-)
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