Comments | slytherinpunk: Fanfic: In Our Hands

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Fanfic: In Our Hands - Chlollie

Jan 15, 2011 14:31

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rating: nc-17, fanfiction, ship: chlollie, fanfic: in our hands, fanfics, rating: m, pairing: chloe/oliver

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insanityclings January 15 2011, 22:53:49 UTC

*Wipes tears from eyes*

I'm really torn between hating you for making me so emotional and loving you for making it so beautiful and eloquent. I really didn't see Dr. Fate's Helmet being the thing that caused all this but it makes so much sense.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next update!!

abarbiestory January 15 2011, 22:57:37 UTC

....... I have so much to say about this story but honestly I'm way to emotional right now to leave a coherent comment. Just....*wipes tears away* it was beautiful and touching and just all around moving! great job guys

spoiler11 January 15 2011, 23:23:11 UTC

Poor CHloe :(
I've been trying to figure out why Chloe left ollie, is it because she saw the future and saw ollie with dinah, and she couldn't take the heartbreak? Because then I could totally sympathise with her. Because right now I'm behind Oliver, and quite angry and upset with her. ;(
I hope you update soon, I really love this story!!

gaialy January 15 2011, 23:45:08 UTC

Interesting...Chloe of course so the bath that Oliver was lead to. He became a public figure, even more than before. But he became the public figure because of the choices that she made. The life she is living in is in counter-action to what she did. The helmet is a powerful thing and takes a while to understand and Chloe did not get it.
At the same time she took the action that she saw coming- protecting her son from those who wanted to hurt Oliver and the Green Arrow. Yet, she could have told him about Connor, but not let that be public knowledge!

kiradamour January 16 2011, 00:24:56 UTC

Love this story !!! And the way they read the fairy tale together ... *sigh*