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fridaloop January 16 2011, 01:22:35 UTC
Wow, this was SO good. I was worried about Chloe's reason for leaving, but it sounds like it was directly related to saving Oliver, so that's good. I love how Connor is smart enough to figure out GA's significance to Chloe. He is so Chloe's kid.

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renka23 January 16 2011, 02:17:35 UTC
Oh my gosh, I really really am liking this story! :)

It hurts to read how both Chloe and Ollie are so broken up. I can't bring myself to be upset with Chloe at all, even after what she's done. I'm just really confused why she left. What exactly did she? And if it's that reasonable, I really can't be angry with her. And I hope she and Ollie have a real talk soon.

Can I just say..? I think, given Connor's intellect, he'll figure out that Ollie is his father even before they tell him.

Can barely wait for the next update. You guys rock! :>

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amazing_07 January 16 2011, 03:07:58 UTC
Big fat crazy tears! Oh, I love this story!

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jediyoda99 January 16 2011, 04:18:01 UTC
It was so nostalgic when Connor was talkjng to Oliver about the Green Arrow. I want for Oliver to tell him right and there that he is his father and that he has been missing him a lot.

And also, Chloe and Oliver needs to speak to each other honestly. They need to air their sentiments and some honest truths between them. Oliver needs to tell CHloe that he and Dinah are no longer together and Chloe needs to tell Oliver that she still loves him and that she wants to be part of their lives.These are just small obstacles for their happy ever after.

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chlollie_86 January 16 2011, 08:22:03 UTC
I loved this chapter! I just wish that both Chloe and Oliver would talk about everything truthfully. Connor will eventually start to see right through them if they take too long. I'm still really interested to see exactly what Chloe saw in the helmet that made her leave. I can't wait until the next chapter. More please!

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