This Chapter nearly broke my heart. They would be the perfect family. I hope that Chloe finds out the Ollie still loves her and that Dinah is sent to the desert forever ;) You really know how to touch the emotions of the reader.
This chapter was amazing, but that's not news. But that was the best chapter so far. I think I'm starting to love this fic more than I love FWB, and I love FWB a lot.
OMG this chapter was amazing! So many things to love!
Oliver and Connor in his room discussing how Chloe collected all the Green Arrow articles she could find, except for the one with a picture of him kissing Dinah was so sad.
I loved the little things that Oliver and Connor seem to have in common, similar tastes and mannerisms.
The story at the end was perfect, Rapunzel is an ideal parallel, at least fairy tale wise, to the beginning of the Chlollie relationship.
Oliver reaching out to touch her and then changing his mind. And Chloe crying at the end made me cry.
Such a great chapter, I can't wait to read more!!!
Thank you so much for this amazing update! It was so emotional, you could literally feel Chloe's pain. I am anxious to find out what exactly Chloe saw when she put on Dr Fate's helmet, but I know that all will be revealed in time. Can't wait for the next update!
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I hope that Chloe finds out the Ollie still loves her and that Dinah is sent to the desert forever ;) You really know how to touch the emotions of the reader.
wonderful Chapter, can wait to read the next one
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This chapter was amazing, but that's not news. But that was the best chapter so far.
I think I'm starting to love this fic more than I love FWB, and I love FWB a lot.
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Oliver and Connor in his room discussing how Chloe collected all the Green Arrow articles she could find, except for the one with a picture of him kissing Dinah was so sad.
I loved the little things that Oliver and Connor seem to have in common, similar tastes and mannerisms.
The story at the end was perfect, Rapunzel is an ideal parallel, at least fairy tale wise, to the beginning of the Chlollie relationship.
Oliver reaching out to touch her and then changing his mind. And Chloe crying at the end made me cry.
Such a great chapter, I can't wait to read more!!!
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It was so emotional, you could literally feel Chloe's pain.
I am anxious to find out what exactly Chloe saw when she put on Dr Fate's helmet, but I know that all will be revealed in time.
Can't wait for the next update!
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