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brittany2922 June 17 2011, 02:15:45 UTC
NOOOOOO!!!! OMG the two of them are driving me crazy with all the UST and misunderstandings and lack of communication. I can't wait to see these two finally hash everything out.

I loved Connor and Oliver working together to chase away Bren. Connor was so cute pushing Oliver toward Bren an Chloe and telling him he had to scare him away, and then Connor getting mad on Ollie's behalf... I loved it!

I'm so glad you updated this story... it's amazing, and I can't wait to see what happens next! =)

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geek_or_unique June 17 2011, 03:27:55 UTC
I want to shake Chloe! NOOO! They need to talk, talk solves everything. They are driving me crazy!
This was a fantastic chapter, like all your chapter always are.

Connor and Oliver chasing Ben away was awesome, hahaha. I want more, Dawn! This fic is too awesome. I love this chapter. <3

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tadashee June 17 2011, 05:17:09 UTC
i love that chloe saw identical expressions on oliver and connor's faces! i still thin connor is a little too mature for 6 and hilarious! i loved how he bragged about oliver to bren. Now all of these misunderstandings have got to stop! I feel so terrible for oliver. I am kinda team oliver on this whole situation! the way you guys worded his dialouge about making a baby together made my heart break! I cant wait to see what chloe says to oliver next! thanks for the awesome chapter! oh and have fun at green lantern! i really want to see it!

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gaialy June 17 2011, 08:21:16 UTC
Of for .... Seriously make then talk. Now. This can gone on for long enough.

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slytherinpunk June 17 2011, 12:15:09 UTC
Lol--it's only lasted this long because of their fears and Connor's constant prescence. Originally when we wrote this chapter they did confront each other--but the chapter ran too long, so I had to break it up and it's in chapter twenty.

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iluvaqt June 17 2011, 09:16:07 UTC
How can she jump to the wrong conclusion after all the time they've spend as a family? She has to know in her heart Oliver could never part Connor from his mother. If anything, I hope this new tension and suspicion cause everything to come out in the open, and without Connor around what they both really need to say will get aired. Hopefully leading to some really nice catching up for lost time. I got the unspoken question she was really asking before the phone call too, what has he told Dinah, but to Oliver she's the past and she's no longer in his life or a part of his future, hence the non-mention :D

Chloe's gotta want to question that too though. How does one not tell your fiance where you are, what you're doing for as long as he's been staying with them?

Thank you for the update. I check in every day, especially on Sundays to see if there's more to this. You're the only one that keeps me tethered to Chlollie these days. That and the odd sweet, well written one off like Serafina's...

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serafina19 June 17 2011, 15:55:13 UTC
(I know this wasn't directed at me, but I wanted to say thanks... that means a lot.)

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