Bank Shot: Bank Deposit (LoveFest Entry # 1)

[smiles_a_lot]

Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Rating: R for smex. Light kink, light bondage, and enough public lewdness to create a disturbance if discovered.

Summary: Jack is a security guard at a bank.  Ennis is a customer who has a safety deposit box at the bank. What did the security cameras see? This is one of three parts.

A/N: I set out to write something dark and

Comments

[madlori]

Muy caliente, but...how can Ennis come in Jack's mouth while wearing a condom? It's quite a trick, that.

[smiles_a_lot]

Yeah, erm, I must take Ennis aside and remind him to stop buying those No Name Condoms and get Trojans. *shame-faced grimace* So I took out the condom part entirely. Eeek. Thanks for pointing out that glaringly obvious mistake. BTW, I had pot roast in my fully functional crock pot and used mushroom soup. It rocked!!

[sienata]

Yes, enquiring minds need to know about that squirting condom!

However, that was the hottest and funniest combo I've read in a while! I was just trying to see if my links worked, wasn't going to read anything tonight, but OH NO!! I couldn't get past you gurlee!!

Good job, confusing condom! :)

[smiles_a_lot]

Yeah, well, they sure don't make those condoms like they used to!! Originally I wrote this without the condom, so I've gone back and edited the condom out completely! This is so humiliating. I submit myself for punishment. ;)Thanks for making this all happen. What a boost to all of us. ♥ Em

[smiles_a_lot]

Actually, the "other" Sam does have some influence but there is another Sam that's tossed in there as well.

I will let you know the answer to the cornflakes question after you let me know how to get congealed oatmeal off my keyboard from when I read your story. So there.

Oh yes, Mr. Sucks-a-Lot and Mr. Yumminy Yum. A killer combination. xx Em

[smiles_a_lot]

I wanted to write a romantic Jack that wasn't effeminate. Just dreamy. I had no idea Sam was even going to show up. I put pen to paper and next thing you know Jack had a sidekick! Thanks for reading.

[vea_68]

Dear SmilesALot,
that was great! Especially the ending was wonderful. This little piece of paper promises a world of love and joy for Jack and Ennis. Extremely well written. Thank you so much!

[smiles_a_lot]

I love little bits of paper. "Paper" is actually one of the central images in my longer fic(s) - mail, envelopes, letters, notes, pictures on the wall, Brego's paper trauma. Glad you liked this.