Bank Shot: Bank Deposit (LoveFest Entry # 1)

Feb 26, 2008 17:40

Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Rating: R for smex. Light kink, light bondage, and enough public lewdness to create a disturbance if discovered.

Summary: Jack is a security guard at a bank.  Ennis is a customer who has a safety deposit box at the bank. What did the security cameras see? This is one of three parts.

A/N: I set out to write something dark and ( Read more... )

smiles_a_lot, bank shot, lovefest

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rt_in_town February 27 2008, 08:24:37 UTC
I love visiting Auntie Em's! So adorable, Jack falling hopelessly in love with Ennis from afar, hastily envisioning him as his future husband and himself as the new Mr. Del Mar. Loved Jack panicking when Ennis shows up, how his big, gruff male heterosexual Sam immediately takes on the role of the friend, trying to help Jack out and make him presentable in front of the future husband, despite his earlier complaints. And what a lovely description of the naughty handcuff fun.

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smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 21:46:22 UTC
And Auntie Em loves when you visit! Enjoyed your comment immensely, thanks for that. From some reader responses, seems Sam has a bit of a following as well. Even though he is capital H Hetero. More naughtiness to follow! ♥ Em

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eandj February 27 2008, 08:45:52 UTC
Great
I had to laugh out loud at Sam- he's too funny
And the sex was hot,hot,hot
glad there will be more
Paula

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smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 21:47:49 UTC
Hey Paula - Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this. Sam's quite a chracter, isn't he? He wasn't even part of this concept but as soon as I put pen to paper, he materialized. He was only supposed to be in this part, but seems he's going to show up in all of them. Yay Sam! xx Em

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rosiet February 27 2008, 09:46:01 UTC
****Jack,

Central Library, 12th Floor, study desk closest to the wall, 8:00 pm tonight.

Ennis****

Em.....I swear.....you take me on that date with these boys.....or I'll go cross eyed!!! That was hot, hot, hot!

I loved Jack writing out his wedding invitations and practising his new name...what an image...oh bliss!!

I can't wait for the next part... Oh no I can't!

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smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 21:49:41 UTC
Yes, I will take you on a date with the boys but only if you remain silent as we will be in the library and our boys will be very studious in their...erm...activities. You can remain silent, can't you Rosie? Hmm???? lol. Ly, Em

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tizi17 February 27 2008, 10:18:24 UTC
*Me likee, me likee a lot*

oh yes - *clapclap* - me really likee a lot...
that was hilarious girl, i so love that funny playing with your language.. yeah, that's the difference to non-english speaker..!
thank you so much dear!

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smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 21:51:51 UTC
Oh gooody! You picked out one of my favourite parts!! I'm glad you enjoyed this, honey. I'll leave the cowboy loving in your very capable hands, ok? Thanks for your comment, and for everything. xx Em

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sweetje February 27 2008, 10:23:55 UTC
I loved this.
You have such a wonderful way of words I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I'm always a little uneasy at reading smex, but you definately made me relax into it.
Thank you. I hope you write more. : )
Debra

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smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 21:55:03 UTC
You're uneasy over reading smex? Wow. I hope this LoveFest helps you get over this uneasiness. lol. Psssst, I'm uneasy over writing smex. Which is usually why there's a lot of joking around in my stories. I figure if the smex really tanks, at least I made people giggle. There will definitely be 2 parts to this series and possibly another one-shot if I can find the time to write all that. Thanks - Em

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