Bank Shot: Bank Deposit (LoveFest Entry # 1)

Feb 26, 2008 17:40

Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Rating: R for smex. Light kink, light bondage, and enough public lewdness to create a disturbance if discovered.

Summary: Jack is a security guard at a bank.  Ennis is a customer who has a safety deposit box at the bank. What did the security cameras see? This is one of three parts.

A/N: I set out to write something dark and ( Read more... )

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Bank Deposit bmshirts February 28 2008, 04:40:05 UTC
Great Part 1. Jack is so delicious here, and Ennis is to die for. I hope Jack gets some relief in Part 2. No blue balls please! I'm going to love the next part up, on Sunday, I hope?
Thanks. Carole

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Re: Bank Deposit smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 23:51:08 UTC
Jack=Delicious. Ennis=Yummy. Why is it I can never write anything without at least one food reference? No wonder my diet has gone to the dogs. Oh and yes ma'am. No blue balls. Got it. xx Em

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bbmbeliever February 28 2008, 13:03:47 UTC
Library = part 2? loved it.

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smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 23:52:03 UTC
Yes, seems our boys will get very studious in the next installment. Glad you liked it. xx Em

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Yumminy Yum Yum Yum anony_mouse19 February 28 2008, 21:59:51 UTC
omg i loved it.this was the story i enjoyed most in lovefest.
**Jack Twist del Mar. Jack del Mar. Jonathan Twist del Mar. Or maybe…Ennis Twist. Ennis del Mar Twist. Ennis del Mar and Jack Twist request the honour of your presence as they celebrate their union at…** aww so sweet.
i loved Sam.and the dialogs are hilarious.i practically loved every single sentence.
thank you.can't wait for the 2nd part :]

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Re: Yumminy Yum Yum Yum anony_mouse19 February 28 2008, 23:00:51 UTC
oh and it's not really important but it's Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry :]

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Re: Yumminy Yum Yum Yum smiles_a_lot February 28 2008, 23:56:02 UTC
Wow. So glad you enjoyed this. There's some truly amazing stories coming out and I'm just happy to be in the company of such fantastic work. Sam seems to have wormed his way into more than a few hearts. For a supporting role, he certainly has quite a following. I'm so glad I could spread some happy around. Thanks for letting me know.

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anonymous February 29 2008, 02:00:21 UTC
You make me soooo very horny, I’m so glad youuuu, came in my mouth…...

LOL! So, I was trying to decide...was that funnier than it was hot, or hotter than it was funny? But I can't decide and it doesn't matter 'cause it was terrific all the way around! Thanks!

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mariez65 February 29 2008, 02:02:50 UTC
Oh, crap - sorry, that was me!

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torry28 February 29 2008, 06:19:59 UTC
Sorry Em,
I'm so late again, its getting to be a bad habit.
Jesus, you are so great I laughed so much, and I sure needed that. Jack wasn't the only one hyperventilating and I spelled that with out looking it up. Wonderful story, any chance of an encore in the library?
Thank you, your still one of the Queens your other half is missing though.
Hugs
Torry
PS I'm such a nerd, of course there is an encore its in tree parts.

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