Bank Shot: Bank Deposit (LoveFest Entry # 1)

[smiles_a_lot]

Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Rating: R for smex. Light kink, light bondage, and enough public lewdness to create a disturbance if discovered.

Summary: Jack is a security guard at a bank.  Ennis is a customer who has a safety deposit box at the bank. What did the security cameras see? This is one of three parts.

A/N: I set out to write something dark and

Comments

[elena_62]

Hi, Em!

This was great! I was a bit worried when I read ''three parts'' though: I imagined we were not going to see any action in the first part! Luckily we did! Indeed, quite an action ;-).

I liked a lot also Jak's thoughts, like here:
''Jack stiffened his spine and figured: Fuck it. He was buff, he had killer abs, he had fresh minty breath, and he’d been told he had blue eyes that would make a stone angel weep. Jack Twist was no slouch, and was considered quite a prize by some. Might as well get his ass kicked for something he’d been wanting to do for weeks.''

Thank you very much for writing and also for wounding up with something fluffy and fun instead of something dark and dangerous!
At the moment I'm for fluffyness...

Ciao

Antonella

PS: Didn't you forget to take away the last bit of the condom part? ''Ennis took off the condom and tied it off, throwing it in the garbage can.''

[smiles_a_lot]

Oh yes, I checked it with S! to make sure it was okay to post a 3-parter as long as the boys got in on in each part. So...no worries. I will not deprive you of the smex! I'm so glad the fluffyness worked for you. Thanks for your comment.

[smiles_a_lot]

Great comment. Thanks. I think that quote was a favourite for a few readers. I'm having so much fun, I'm just so grateful to Lola and S! for coming up with this LoveFest. I'm sure we will all look back on all this fondly, as people do with Woodstock. lol. Yeah, man, it was freaking awesome, there was free smex everywhere, I didn't sleep for three days!! lol. xx Em

[jennasts]

I have apparently arrived after the condom has long departed, so I had nothing to complain about at all, all I did was laugh my head off. What a delight! And this coming from a reader who does *not* like even the lightest form of bondage, who was braced against the damn handcuffs. I sort of closed my eyes as I read that part, but it was okay. I'd forgive you much worse for snappy dialogue that had me chuckling so loudly my cat-in-my-lap turned around to look at me as if I were nuts. This turned out beautifully, and I'm so glad you didn't go dark. This is way more fun! Thanks so much for writing this!
Love,
Jenna

[smiles_a_lot]

Thank you, there is a God, I'd fixed up the condom debacle by the time you were able to read this. At least you read a clean copy. Well, maybe, dirty. :) Poor cat-in-your-lap, disturbed from her(?) little nap. Please extend my apologies.
Jenna, I'm so glad you perservered despite your misgivings. I guarantee any further kink will be relatively mild compared to others. Your comments mean so much. Thanks. xx Em

Your're the queen Em

[brokeback1963]

Hey Em, I can not write here everything I want so I wrote for you a post in Ennisjack.

You amazes me one more time. I have no words. That was hilarious, sweet, so hot and marvelous!!

Thank you so much!!

Re: Your're the queen Em

[smiles_a_lot]

Hey BT, my quoting superstar. I loved your comment on EJ and on here. Thanks so much, my dear. It feels really good to know my efforts are appreciated. xx Em

[lolitaray]

OMG Jack writing out his and Ennis's names was the totally most sweetest thing I've read in a long time. :) Loved it! I was ROFL about the 'bank deposit' also!

[smiles_a_lot]

Thanks, Lola. Psst, I used to do that in Latin class. Fill a notebook with "Mrs. Timothy Hutton" written again and again. lol. Thanks for letting me know you liked this. I always love hearing from you. Hope you're having fun Down Under. xx Em