Pairing: Jack/Ennis Rating: **** for public sex, slight kink and toys. Summary: Jack goes to meet Ennis at the library. Will they study quietly or make all sorts of noise? This is Part 2 of 3 LoveFest entries. Dedication: To
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there were so many entries for the lovefest but honestly, most of them didn't catch my eye with the synopsis. yours, however, was very very very intriguing, especially when you mentioned the LIBRARY. i don't know but wow, that's like the hottest place EVER to have sex/foreplay at!
(i should know, haha)
anyway, this was awesome, no doubt about it. i like sam, he's real sweet. ennis is such a minx! can't wait for the next update. thanks for this!
I think I read a one-shot last year with someone having sex in a library, maybe for the dream challenge?, but I can't remember who it was. I wanted to credit that person. Was it you? I've had this idea, well, since I was in University, forced to spend countless hours in the library, but, still I wanted to acknowledge I wasn't the first person to write this scenario.
Anyways, glad you liked this and you have the same library attachment as I do! Ennis=Minx. True, that. Don't you want to just pet him all over? - Em
Yes, who knew the library could provide such inspiration. (I'm in a library right now as I type this.) Almost as exciting as the gym. ;)
I do try to mix equal parts hotness with romance whenever I write, although I worried that Sam was going to be too much of a distraction. But I so wanted to give people a sense of Jack, and what he needs, and the type of person he is. Sam's the vehicle for that. And Ennis did surprise me because he was going to do the mysterious stranger thing but he convinced me that he wanted to steal a few kisses first. I'm such a pushover, I just couldn't deny him.
Thanks for your encouragement, bud. Even though you are very naughty to your beta and don't do as your told. :) Em
Sam is a really great friend. He wants to make sure Jack is safe. He loves Jack in his own way, I think. Sex in a library. Now that had to be a challange. ; ) Jack barely managed to stifle himself there a couple of times. I like that. I'm looking forward to your next installment of the Lovefest. I love this story. : ) Debra
Your kitty is so cute!! I'm glad you picked up on the love Sam and Jack have for each other. I've often wondered how even one true friend could have changed the course of events for either canon Jack or canon Ennis. Which is why Ennis had Nick in The Dance. And why Jack has Sam here. Glad you're enjoying this series. I'm having a lot of fun writing them. - Em
wow, that was sizzling! Very very hot and also I loved all the clever references, and Ryan Seacrest as the safe word was hilarious! Thanks -- can't wait for the next installment!
As I said earlier. One of the reasons why I wanted to write a modern-day AU is because I wanted to have Ryan Seacrest as someone's safe word. Now if Ryan is the yellow, then who would be red? Simon Cowell? lol. Sorry, welcome to my quirky world. Thanks for your comment. - Em
The dildo was hot and so was doing it in the library! I also loved Jack not being able to make a sound so this was very hot too:
He couldn’t stop it -- he grunted. A deep, needy sound that sounded pitiful even to his own ears. Immediately the mouth and the dildo were gone. No, no, no, oh fuck. He gritted his teeth and clenched his fists, swallowing his moans. I'll be quiet, I want you, please, I need, I need….
And then this just cracked me up! It's so you!
Oh shit. I came in his mouth so hard I either choked him to death or cracked his head open. Way to go, Twist. Nothing says I want to spend the rest of my life with you than giving Prince Charming a concussion.
LOOOL!
Sam is still the sweetest, I so love reading their banter, it's brilliant!
You go girl! ♥ I love your style. Thank you, as always! ♥
Glad you liked this. Poor Jack, he had to be quiet without benefit of a gag. Although I did flirt with that idea a bit but then figured Sam would have a thing or two to say about that! Love your comment, honey. xx Em
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(i should know, haha)
anyway, this was awesome, no doubt about it. i like sam, he's real sweet. ennis is such a minx! can't wait for the next update. thanks for this!
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Anyways, glad you liked this and you have the same library attachment as I do! Ennis=Minx. True, that. Don't you want to just pet him all over? - Em
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Yes, who knew the library could provide such inspiration. (I'm in a library right now as I type this.) Almost as exciting as the gym. ;)
I do try to mix equal parts hotness with romance whenever I write, although I worried that Sam was going to be too much of a distraction. But I so wanted to give people a sense of Jack, and what he needs, and the type of person he is. Sam's the vehicle for that. And Ennis did surprise me because he was going to do the mysterious stranger thing but he convinced me that he wanted to steal a few kisses first. I'm such a pushover, I just couldn't deny him.
Thanks for your encouragement, bud. Even though you are very naughty to your beta and don't do as your told. :) Em
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Sex in a library. Now that had to be a challange. ; ) Jack barely managed to stifle himself there a couple of times. I like that.
I'm looking forward to your next installment of the Lovefest. I love this story. : )
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He couldn’t stop it -- he grunted. A deep, needy sound that sounded pitiful even to his own ears. Immediately the mouth and the dildo were gone. No, no, no, oh fuck. He gritted his teeth and clenched his fists, swallowing his moans. I'll be quiet, I want you, please, I need, I need….
And then this just cracked me up! It's so you!
Oh shit. I came in his mouth so hard I either choked him to death or cracked his head open. Way to go, Twist. Nothing says I want to spend the rest of my life with you than giving Prince Charming a concussion.
LOOOL!
Sam is still the sweetest, I so love reading their banter, it's brilliant!
You go girl! ♥ I love your style. Thank you, as always! ♥
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Glad you liked this. Poor Jack, he had to be quiet without benefit of a gag. Although I did flirt with that idea a bit but then figured Sam would have a thing or two to say about that! Love your comment, honey. xx Em
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