Bank Shot: Overdue Item (Love Fest Entry # 2)

Mar 01, 2008 14:29

Pairing: Jack/Ennis 
Rating: **** for public sex, slight kink and toys.
Summary: Jack goes to meet Ennis at the library. Will they study quietly or make all sorts of noise? This is Part 2 of 3 LoveFest entries.
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rosiet March 2 2008, 09:51:05 UTC
JE-SUS!!!!!!!!!!!! Em, you have EXCELLED yourself girl!!!

I don't know where to begin..... humour and hotness - written to PERFECTION - I'm laughing and gasping in equal measure.

B.u.t. In two short chapters....you've made me love.... THREE people! You've created depth and character to Jack, Ennis, AND Sam. Now that's wonderful writing. I BELIEVE that there is more here than HOT sex. I BELIEVE that this is LOVE here. I can FEEL Jack's excitement as Ennis introduces him to the scene, and Ennis' joy and caring feelings toward Jack.

....and I can't tell you how MUCH I am looking forward to the Iguana Lounge....but then you know me. So you already know how MUCH...hehehehehe..... whew..yep. This COULD have left me speechless...but then - you also know that's just not possible. Thank you Auntie Em!!

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smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:10:00 UTC
Oh honey. What you said about me making you love THREE people. That's, wow, that's so sweet. Sam's kind of my baby, he's a conglomeration of many different people I love and inspired by a few other characters, so I'm overjoyed you're drawn to him as I am. Plus, even though I wanted to write a PWP, Sam's the element that keeps this from being a PWP. He's the one that's providing the depth to keep this romantic. As for the Iguana Lounge. Tee hee. Get your bucket of ice ready, honey. Or not. I'm sure your hubby will appreciate it!! lmao. xx Em

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cornflake2912 March 2 2008, 10:03:21 UTC
OMG.... I stopped breathing... That was so hot. Can´t wait for the 3rd part! thank you!

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smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:11:22 UTC
Oops. I hope you've caught your breath by now. You're gonna need your strength for Part 3. ;) Thanks for reading. - Em

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annika1968 March 2 2008, 10:07:02 UTC
Oh my God, that was almost too much for me on this Sunday morning.

I love the banter between Jack and Sam. Sam is such a good friend. He really cares for Jack. Who would voluntary witness two men while having sex??? ;-)

And the sex. HOT HOT HOT. I’m still panting and trying not to faint.

I don’t dare to image what will happen in part 3. butt plug and cock ring, oh my God. For sure it’s going to get hotter. Can’t wait for it but will I be able to read it at work without making a fool of myself? I’ll take up the challenge.

Thanks for this wonderful gift, Annika

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smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:14:24 UTC
I know, that Sam. Willing to take one for the team. Imagine being STUCK there, listening to all those slurpy noises, and stifled moans, and slick sounds. Especially after having to watch the bank vault exploits earlier in the day. Sam deserves a medal, for true.

Umm, a word of warning. Part 3? You probably shouldn't read it at work. Actually it won't be up until the Sunday posting. Hope that helps you keep your job.

Thanks for your comment, Annika. xx Em

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tizi17 March 2 2008, 10:50:01 UTC
yohooooo that was great! taking a very nice direction there girl.. ;-))
and the best is... there's a next one!

thank you - i love your style, you know it!

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smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:15:34 UTC
Thanks, Fausta. I had a feeling you might enjoy this chapter. Actually, you might enjoy the next chapter MORE. Tee hee. xx Em

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liseron March 2 2008, 11:03:36 UTC
Just an attempt of a summary : L O L !!! and Y U M M !!!
Oh I have still tears of laugh in the eyes and troubles in other parts of my body that I expressely can't name here...LOL
You really made my day all shiny and happy and horny !
I can say you " Woody Allen-ing " this Sunday if you get what I mean .
More Sam ! *jump of satisfaction!!!*
I love him !!! :)
The Library scene was obviously hottest than the hell itself , but Sam as a chaperone really added to the whole thing ! :)))
And I'm also so much glad that the guys had this obvious connection ( hmmm...I don't talk about the dildo connection , even if this one is yummy !!! )
But you show us that you want not only sex between us and my little romantical soul always need this kind of thing...

I could quote everything from Sam , so just this one :( ok , 2! )
" Worse, what if he’s a head case with his victims’ body parts carefully labeled in ZipLoc bags in his freezer? Is that what you want as the title to your autobiography? I Deep Throated An Axe Murderer?”

"Plus, your pain ( ... )

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smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:21:01 UTC
Mireille - OMG your comment brought tears of laugh in my eyes. I love your enthusiasm and all the Woody Allen talk. Wow! I can't believe you compared me! Good thing we both like Woodys. (Evil grin) I also did a jump of satisfaction when you wrote about me being your Love Doctor! lol. You are so great. Thanks so much. You have tipped me well and I would be pleased to serve you again. You are welcome at Auntie Em's Den anytime. xx Em
p.s. You might want to get a special asbestos suit for your printer for Part 3.

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