Bank Shot: Overdue Item (Love Fest Entry # 2)

Mar 01, 2008 14:29

Pairing: Jack/Ennis 
Rating: **** for public sex, slight kink and toys.
Summary: Jack goes to meet Ennis at the library. Will they study quietly or make all sorts of noise? This is Part 2 of 3 LoveFest entries.
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BRAVO!!! brokeback1963 March 2 2008, 11:57:21 UTC
I don’t know what to do here, whether quote Lindsey post or the whole Em chapter!!! OMG I can not f***ing think straight right now!!! Did I say you’re the queen Em? Wrong!! You’re a goddess!! Like Lindsey said this is absolute perfection!! You should write a book girl, you’re so f***ing amazing!! I have no good words enough for this, really ( ... )

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Re: BRAVO!!! smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:37:25 UTC
Wow honey. I don't know where to start. I have to scroll up in order to get to the top of your comment! OMG. You are so wonderful and generous and I thank you so very much for your enthusiasm and support.Sometimes writing is a lonely business, and it's easy to let self-doubt chip away at my confidence. Then I receive a comment like yours and I can almost believe what I put out there isn't crap! lol. And the WATER WALKING JESUS comment. lmao. Will you give me permission to use that in Part 3? Thanks again! xx Em

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Re: BRAVO!!! brokeback1963 March 4 2008, 11:52:59 UTC
Awww Em!!! I can't believe you liked my long boring comment. And above all, I can't believe you want to use something I said in your next chapter!! OMG That's amazing!!! You don't even need to ask me for permission!!! That's a huge honor, Em!! Wow you really touched my heart here. I can't stop smiling, I'm so thrilled right now.

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS!!!

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Overdue Item bmshirts March 2 2008, 12:48:46 UTC
Oh, simply outstanding Part 2! The conversation between Jack and Sam was so clever. And poor Jack, sooo horny. His fantasy is about to come true and he's hoping for a three condom night! LOL!! Which, btw, he didn't get! But I don't think he's complaining.
The meeting at the Iguana Lounge should prove veeery interesting. I can't wait for Part 3.
And I do so hope Jack gets his wish to become Jack Twist Del Mar!
Thanks. Carole

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Re: Overdue Item smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:41:37 UTC
Hey Carole:
It took me almost two days to get that Jack and Sam conversation down to my satisfaction. Oddly enough, it only took me two hours to get the library scene done, I wonder why? Maybe because I've had that particular fantasy since I went to University, many moons ago? lol.
Yes, don't feel too sorry for Jack and his unused condoms. I have a feeling he'll be going through his supply before next week! Thanks for reading. xx Em

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acquaalta March 2 2008, 13:04:52 UTC
OMG ... I really need to go to the library more often. Just ours doesn't have these stalls - too bad.
Well, this was incredibly hot and greatly written as well. The history of Jack's friendship with Sam, the talk they had. He really seems to be a great guy. And then the ... wow, and the dildo on top of all. And their planned next encounter ... wear them…inside and out. I can hardly wait. Looking forward very much. Thanks for sharing. B.

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smiles_a_lot March 3 2008, 21:43:45 UTC
Hey B: Glad you picked up on the friendship between Sam and Jack. It's pretty special isn't it? As for Part 3, it should be verrry interesting. I just hope Jack brings enough condoms! - Em

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annabuffy March 2 2008, 13:08:21 UTC
God, that was way hot. Sam is funny and a good friend. Can't wait to read about the next meeting.

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smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:03:06 UTC
Thanks. Sam has gained quite a fan base! The next meeting will be up by Sunday. - Em

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smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:06:44 UTC
Thank you, I love love love your comment! This universe is a lot of fun to write and I'm glad you're enjoying this world. Maybe this fic will help your studying because then you'll want to be at the library all the time! Although people might wonder why you're always checking under the desk! ♥ Em

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