Comments | smiles_a_lot: Bank Shot: Overdue Item (Love Fest Entry # 2)

smiles_a_lot

Bank Shot: Overdue Item (Love Fest Entry # 2)

Mar 01, 2008 14:29

Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: **** for public sex, slight kink and toys.
Summary: Jack goes to meet Ennis at the library. Will they study quietly or make all sorts of noise? This is Part 2 of 3 LoveFest entries.
Dedication: To
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Comments 69

anony_mouse19 March 2 2008, 13:47:00 UTC

damn i love this!i loved the brief history of Jack and Sam.i looove Sam.he's so funny and cute.
Ryan Seacrest!?ROTFLMAO x) and "no fuck YOU" lol.

**He was just about to get his ass back on the chair when he felt a soft kiss land on his clothed dick. It was almost as mind-blowing as his orgasm.** oh yeah, agreed.

**“Naw,” Jack said smugly. “He used a dildo.” Sam looked like Wile E. Coyote right after an anvil dropped on his head.** bwahaha xD

**“Not for long, my man. It’s gonna be Jack Twist del Mar by this time next year. Mark my words.”** aww
and how sweet was that Ennis couldn't leave right away.

alright.i wish this was a long story.please?i can beg.i just loved them too much.Sam too.i also want to see that wedding and how they went there.*sigh*

thank you :]

smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:10:58 UTC

Well...it is a long story! Three parts long! lol. I'm so happy you're enjoying this and want more. I wish I'd come up with more exciting titles so we could have a cool name for this universe. As it stands right now, this is my LoveFest universe. lol. Oh well. Hey, does that sound like I'm wanting to write more than three parts in this universe? Hmmmm. Thanks again for reading. xx Em

anony_mouse19 March 4 2008, 15:12:26 UTC

Hey, does that sound like I'm wanting to write more than three parts in this universe?
oh yes!pleaseeeeee *on her knees*

jacks_key March 2 2008, 14:47:34 UTC

W00t! Aw, HELL yeah, that was hot! Can't wait for part three! :D

smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:13:36 UTC

Hollaaa! Part 3 on Sunday! Thanks! - Em

bbmbeliever March 2 2008, 15:11:48 UTC

holy hot! love this. cant wait for the Iguana Lounge! You could continue this series forever, I wouldnt mind :)

Love Sam and Jack's history and friendship.

sienata March 2 2008, 17:10:23 UTC

this was awesome. Sam and Jack's history was really nice to read about, i love all teh funny lines you use - The Night of the Giving Head!! There were boocoos of them. I love this your great sense of humor, and then the library sex with the DILDO!! You go girl!!!

Whoot!!! love it, thanks so much for playing. i'm all atwitter for the next installment. butt plugs RULE!! :)

smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:18:32 UTC

Hey S! Oh yeah, you pointed out Night of the Giving Head. I racked my brain for two days trying to come up with that one. Plus, I had a feeling you would enjoy the toys. I love the image of you all atwitter. Thanks again! - Em

smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:16:03 UTC

Wow, thanks so much. This series is a lot of fun to write. I'm hoping the Iguana Lounge lives up to your expectations! - Em

cazzyj6740 March 2 2008, 19:36:36 UTC

this scenario is amazing and sooo erotic! wowsa!! Fantastic read!

smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:19:20 UTC

Thanks. We are all getting so spoiled with all the amazing LoveFest entries! - Em

humanstudier March 2 2008, 23:13:42 UTC

This was awesome and all the other commenters already said it better. My favorite lines:

"(three, oh please please please)."

"the words he’d written before Jack even got there: “No, fuck YOU.”"

"Sam looked like Wile E. Coyote right after an anvil dropped on his head"

Thank you for this MARVELOUS gift!

smiles_a_lot March 4 2008, 14:20:27 UTC

You're very welcome. What a lovely comment. I always love getting feedback on what lines struck a chord with people. Thanks for letting me know. - Em