The Dance: Chapter 15 - Make Me Live

[smiles_a_lot]

Genre & Rating: Canon/AU, R (finally) for sexual content.

Disclaimer: Jack and Ennis were created by the Great and Mighty Annie Proulx. I'm just the dude behind the yellow curtain working the lights and using the Big Voice microphone.

Summary: This is the continuation of  The Package, and takes place after Ennis and Alma's divorce. Ennis has moved

Comments

[ramona4jake]

How endearing is Ennis, waiting for his Jack, making all those preparations for him ! And then making love to him, and then making him cry with just a few words !
Thank you so much for this, Em, it was awesome !!

ok baby ok

[bbmjack324]

Excellent chapter--from Ennis giving the tour, Jack happy with it all as long as he's with Ennis, and the joking dialog and HOT SEX.

hee hee:

“Hey, Ennis, gotta news flash for you.” Jack said sarcastically. “I’m a sure thing. You don’t have to get me liquored up to have your way with me.”

Yeeehaaa:

“Shut up and climb up your beanpole, Jack. Ride me hard and fast and make it count,” Ennis said through locked jaws, his hands on Jack’s hips propelling Jack downwards with such force it’s a wonder the bed, or Jack, didn’t split in two.

Re: ok baby ok

[smiles_a_lot]

I hardly ever use the endearment "baby" because, I don't know, it makes me think of shifty men with hairy chests and gold necklaces, wearing Brut cologne. I love it in other fics, but have been very frugal with its use in mine. I only use it when it counts. And since Ennis said, make it count, I did. Glad it worked for you! xx

[bbmbeliever]

Finally, yay! So glad you are committed to this story. I love it!

[smiles_a_lot]

I know! Hallelujah! I was so happy to post this! So glad you're a committed reader to this story. Yay! xx

[indigoeyes_450]

I love every word of this chapter, from the lone fiddle kisses to the messages written with the green crayon to the rough and fast sex. This is a wonderful update. Thanks you so much! -Dominique

[smiles_a_lot]

Dominique,
Thanks so much for mentioning the lone fiddle kisses. Not sure if that imagery really worked for anyone except me. So now I know there's someone out there who figured out what I was getting at. Whew! Thanks! xx

[bentgyro]

So emotional, so warm, so loving!!
Loved it!
Thank you!
HT

[smiles_a_lot]

Thanks so much. What a lovely comment. Makes me feel all gooey. xx