The Dance - Chapter 17: Long Time Comin'

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Genre & Rating: Canon/AU, NC-17 for cussin only, despite the very slashy chapter title. Sorry.

Disclaimer: Jack and Ennis were created by the Great and Mighty Annie Proulx. I'm just the dude behind the yellow curtain working the lights and using the Big Voice microphone.

Summary: This is the continuation of The Package, and takes place after Ennis

Comments

[torry28]

I'm Happy you are back safe and sound and writing and I can't help if I'm always crying. Damn what am I suppose to do when you write so, I mean his sister loves Ennis no matter what. Ennis cried and Jack called him and there is hope. And it could have been a total disaster. You liking Mexico so much and not coming back and Jack giving Ennis the hasta la vista baby sign.
And I'm babbling.
Thank you Em.
Hugs for a lovely and sweet chapter.

[bentgyro]

So happy to see you back! What a lovely chapter -
I know it was full of angst, but some things got straightened out. It's wonderful that Ennis' sister still loves him and doesn't judge and thinks that Jack is cute! Waiting for more!
Thank you!
HT

[denim_girl2006]

So glad to see you back safe & sound. I thought it must be about time for the next chapter! :) You kept me guessing with Missy's reaction, what she was thinking. I was very, very relieved at her attitude, and had to smile when she made her little joke. I was glad the chapter went on long enough for Jack to call and that they spoke a little, even though nothing was settled. I am anxious to hear more!!!

[big_heart_june]

Hey you ♥ this was simply gorgeous, packed with so much greatness I could just quote the entire chapter. Wow, Missy is something else, you wrote her and them together beautifully. I'm so glad she's back in Ennis' life. I absolutely loved Ennis calling Jack his guy ♥ that's huge for Ennis.
I'm so glad Jack called, that was written so wonderfully too. I sound like a broken record! lol but it's just true! I wish they were together again and I hope they will be soon. Part of me was hoping Jack hadn't left and was calling from some motel close by or something...wishful thinking!

I'm very glad you're okay again and that work is going so good, go you! ♥
Thanks so much, Em XOXOXOXO

[tizi17]

good to have you back girl! and still tanned.... ;-)
so, for me no worries, it was a good chapter, i love your story, the way it develops, the way you lead things.. i love it.
thanks, and thanks of course to the betas.. ;-)